WOW!
I'm stunned by such elegant poetry!
WRite on my friend Jeff!
Your pen drips powerful ink!
WArmly, WArrior PURPLE Lady Sheeeoox

Hi! I apologize for not commenting sooner on your poem; I have had massive computer problems.

My, this is powerful, and well written, Jeff! Great lines throughout.
Excellent poetry!

Thank you,
Sheila
It is nice to read you again; and Happy New Year to you!

passionate~~~
drawing
can feel the slight madness
in the air
BigSmiles cool writing

These are passionately powerful sentiments to which I can completely relate, Jeff. Thank you. Best of the new year to you with love and peace,

Regis

beautiful write--and desperately, hauntingly sad-i am glad you have posted again

Jesus, Joseph and Mary...I feel the weight of despair amd I want to help. Excellent pen with heavy emotions.
Susan

Quite a yearning in this write young man. Your words have been chosen carefully. Holly

A sad offering...even though so much to offer!!

Happy New Year My Friend!!

Tell Albert I say Congraz on his book!!

Love Tinka

Love Tinka

interesting work, enjoyed the read

Sad but yet a glimmer of hope that the candle of your love will be seen by your lover. Been a long time between writes for you Jeff. Welcome back.

I'm watching that flame, flickering on the windowsill...breaking through that darkness of the burning abyss as something, someone so enormously compelling has siezed the poet's core leaving him a marionette of her invisible whim...lost in her"spark"...and on fire.



Hugely passionate, Jeff, with the kind of yearning that gnaws and leaves you hopelessly helpless. I love the build...the way the words climb with the static emotion...and I love the sensation you create...anguish of the best kind. I'd love to make someone feel this way!



So nice to see your words again, Poet!

Happy, happy New Year,

Love,

Taylor xo

Very nice indeed,Happy New Years