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Untouchable

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The poem says it all. We've all been there. This was Donna. She was 'untouchable.'

Wednesday, October 29, 2003



There you stand, tossing your hair about,
smiling, laughing, talking -- oblivious to me.
You're my obsession, but I'm just an object;
a buoy at sea, somewhere in the fuzzy edges
of your peripheral vision.

Every time that you move ... or look my way,
I just ... can't ... breathe!

You know what? I notice EVERYTHING about you!
I notice the way the light reflects off your
teeth when you laugh and smile. I notice the glint of golden sunlight in your hair. I notice the flecks
of brown and gold honey that drip on me from your eyes,
whenever I'm fortunate enough that you glance my way.

I notice the timbre of your voice. I notice the way
your chest moves when you breathe. I notice the shape
of your body; your face; every curve; every trace.

I notice the graceful flow of your hands and fingers.
Your presence upon my mind -- it CONSTANTLY lingers...

I notice the shape of your lips;
 so inviting.
I notice the way that you walk;
 so exciting.

I choke when I am near you;
Paralyzed -- when I hear you.

I SEE you,
but I just... can't ...
TOUCH you!



Copyright ©2003 Jeff Mason


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Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed
Reviewed on November 14, 2003
Hey Jeff:

Not exactly what I'd anticipate for a Pink Floyd fan :-P, (smile), still this side of your experience is a perfect read for those out of touch with soulmates.
blessin's,
cynth'ya lewis reed

Reviewed by P. Michaels (Reader)
Reviewed on November 10, 2003

This is a common feeling, and it's said well. It really hurts when it happens.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on October 30, 2003
Jeff this was touching....you have lovely thoughts of her...good write...floria

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 30, 2003
You've spoken for many a male on this planet, Jeff. Great write!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on October 30, 2003
Oh this is good, how did I miss this one! Can feel the ache.

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on October 29, 2003
Ahhhhhh know this feeling well, and it is even more frustrating for those considered to be the untouchable! ;O)
Excellant expression on this one!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on October 29, 2003
She should be so lucky that you would give her the chance to be touched by you. Maybe she feels the same way? And you just don't know it? Good write Jeff. Lisa

Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on October 29, 2003
Tinka, I thought you and Peggy Bertrand might like this one. :)
I just SEE Donna in my mind, and I remember EVERY little thing
about her; how I felt back then. She was always "just beyond my
reach." -- And, it was sooo darned FRUSTRATING !!!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 29, 2003
Don't I know this untouchable feeling...and how it can hurt you badly!!!

You spoke my mind in this one Jeff!!

Tell me...how you did it!!

Love Tinka


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