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Books
· Whispers in the Wake


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· On Mortality and The Butterfly Effect


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· a nation bonded beyond its differences

· pensive remembrance - Thomas Horton tribute

· i am (the brink of life you breathe)...

· needful things

· Etched in Hues

· loss of modality

· Soulspeak

· Catatonia

· Beringia

· Reparations

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unhide my heart

by Jeff Mason — Read all 207 poems by Jeff Mason

Tuesday, January 13, 2004

i want to see your awesome eyes
and feel your breath
upon my skin

i need you deep inside my soul
where i can taste
your words again

and show to you my ev'ry thought
unhide my heart
where it's been shelved

and drown in deepest depths of you
beyond which i
have never delved

i want to climb outside my pain
by letting you
destroy my shell

i want to hold my destiny
my you
who saved me from my hell

Copyright © 2004 Jeff Mason


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Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on January 17, 2004
WOW!! You held me near with this write.....Totally moving Jeff....ty, Dani

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 14, 2004
Deeply moving and meaningful, Jeff. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on January 14, 2004
Wonderful flowing write!

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on January 14, 2004
This is a great style that works.

Reviewed by Erica Ivory
Reviewed on January 14, 2004
i want to climb
outside my pain
by letting you
destroy my shell

i want to hold
my destiny
my you
who saved me
from my hell

Bravo... This captured me.. Definitely one for my library!

Reviewed by anne cunningham
Reviewed on January 14, 2004
cool

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 14, 2004
I want to climb
outside my pain
by letting you
destroy my shell

Powerfully penned, Jeff.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 14, 2004
Tender write Jeff!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Gaye Dale (Reader)
Reviewed on January 14, 2004
This is a gentle and vulnerable expression an innermost need. Refreshing in it's honesty. Simple, yet totally effective in it's delivery!

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on January 14, 2004
I had never seen the word 'unhide', before. I find it to be very effective as used in this poem, because it stands out to point to the very thing you are asking. Good one!

Carmen

Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry
Reviewed on January 13, 2004
This is a great write, Jeff. ~~Bonnie Q

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 13, 2004
are you speaking to your oversoul? smooth and powerfully delivered poem ...

Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 13, 2004
powerhouse poem Jeff, really cuts it in half, a knockout swing, (good review huh, hehe ) al

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on January 13, 2004
This is a WONDERFUL composition, Jeff!


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