Awesome Jeff:
"Slipstream," what an evocative title. It gives credence to each verse penned. This was probingly penned. I especially like verse 5. ". . . of things long dead and born again . . ." What implications these words alone carry. Wow! I enjoyed the read. You made me feel and critically process and reexamine the endless feast. Great job.
and steer the wildest winds that roar
and tame the fearsome beast
as teardrops rain from misty sky
Extraordinary poetry!
"Slipstream," what an evocative title. It gives credence to each verse penned. This was probingly penned. I especially like verse 5. ". . . of things long dead and born again . . ." What implications these words alone carry. Wow! I enjoyed the read. You made me feel and critically process and reexamine the endless feast. Great job.
Marion
excellent writing
Gina
SueB
excellent
William
Reindeer
Andrea
Thank You for sharing "slipstream".
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
we fall from grace again
and fear to dream of endless love
an unforgiving sin
..OK you guys..I am NOW officially your No.1 Fan..YAY!!!
Superb write...just magnificent...into my library it goeeeeees!!!
Ves *smile*
Jeff and Al you are One mind binding Pair!!
Love Tinka
This is excellent.
"in granite gray and wispy white
they trace your subtle form
as streamers light the Heaven’s night
amidst our passion’s storm
and crisscross skies and shake the earth
add froth to ocean’s flue
and seal the vow of sanctity
of bonds betwixt we two "
Peg
"add froth to ocean’s flue"
"our merge
an endless feast"