I hope I'll go back, I heard her say;
I hope to return to my homeland one day.
We all hope for things, both large and small.
I hope that my kids grow up fine and tall.
Gran hopes that she'll die in her bed of old age
And I hope for peace in the world at some stage.
I hope that my son doesn't get mixed up with drugs,
or ever gets friendly with muggers or thugs.
My daughter hopes Greg will ask for a date,
and I hope he doesn't bring her home late.
I hope that my washing gets dry on the line,
it will if the weather stays hot and fine.
My husband hopes that the horses he backs
will race home like wildfire and eat up the tracks.
We all hope to own our own house one day,
and hope we won't have a large mortgage to pay.
Our aims and our dreams help keep faith alive,
but hope, firm and strong, is what helps us survive.
I just visited your site and read some of the excerpts from a couple of your e-books. I enjoyed the read. Thank You. I bookmarked your page so I can go back later and purchase of couple of them.
The above poem is lively and the meter holds up well in most places. I envy that because I do not do well with rhymed and metered verse. I can handle internal rhyme in my free verse but it is mostly slant rhyme. I don't seem to hear the beat the same as others do. Ah Well. We must all have our own style.
I invite you to stop by my home page here at Authro's Den as well as my other page at www.geocities.com/SoHo/Bisdtro/4965. I hope you enjoy the visits.
Amor
great words.