Linda, most of us feel this way at some time. I turn to God to see me through these times. It has been a while since you wrote this, so I hope everything looks much better now. Hugs, Joyce
The lines flow remarkably well up until the very last one, which I would consider reading carefully, something seems grammatically...wrong. I don't know, maybe I'm wrong. But I love the way each line pulls you like a rubber band upon which you snap at the last word and rebound into the next line. Well done.
From First Love to its destructive end and on to new beginnings, Mary Angela Nangini's poems explore the birth and death of a relationship. The powerful poems are presented in two parts with an introduction to her next book My Ontario Beautiful. (Th
Reindeer
all turning into nothing but numbers lately...loved the write.
floria
Things do have a tendency to improve just as we think we are on our last breath. Keep the faith.