I re-read this poem and thought that it deserved to closer to the top of this collection. I hope you agree.
For an a few minutues
I saw you locked
In a sweet embrace
A being of incredible beauty
Sensual, romantic
Your feet moved my passion
Your legs were like dreams
Of unspeakable softness
I wanted you - it was pain
Mingled with taunting
Passion and temptation
I burned, and the fire
Expoded over my face
And you saw it, too
Then you tossed your hair
Into the sky of my soul
And I heard thunder
In my heart
Be all my sins remembered
And more, be the star
At the center of my universe
So that I can dream
Forever of your fields
Of sensual splendor
Reminds me of the girl I kissed on at Convergence 10. Want to use that picture for this. I could send it via email. A man of my own heart. A sucker for a beautiful woman. You are a creative poet and it shows with this write.
Ah, you transport me back to a time when such encounters in cafes or restaurants or parks or even streets ignited my fantasies.
A passionate and exciting poem, Ron. I particularly love this passage:
"Then you tossed your hair
Into the sky of my soul
And I heard thunder
In my heart ..."
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very sensual and passionate poem you've penned here!
A passionate and exciting poem, Ron. I particularly love this passage:
"Then you tossed your hair
Into the sky of my soul
And I heard thunder
In my heart ..."
Great!
Gina