"When we were"
good friends, in their
private hours, grouping--
fascinated by the
careless time--lose themselves ...
in the rich contents
of playing iTunes
music ... song ...
after ... song--excited lid
dances--disbands clinging
impersonal social norms--cuts
a great chasm--right through ...
opulent carpet ... High,
on peaceable minds ...
and cool drinks--sinks ...
under (onto) ... the floor ...
while others enjoy
the fragments of their
own inclusions, watching
themselves, in a friend, revel
freedom ...
shifting around, like children ...
making myths about it ...
Written By, Darkest Angel
Written November 13, 2010
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As I read this I didn't see real freedom. I saw a sense of boredom created by opulence and over choice leading to obsessive-compulsive music listening, drinking or other activity that contributes not one iota to the benefit of all. Childish behavior that we are all want to.
Ron