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Inside OUT
by Darkest Angel → (All Poetry by Darkest Angel)
Monday, December 31, 2018    Rated "G" by the Author.
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Positively me!

 "Inside OUT"




caressing glass
wings

On the outside
looking into your
cloudy thickening, ill feeling
glass scales

Your fiery breath contacts
my soul's sanctuary, though, 
births a confused fire… 
will it warm or burn me as
I am restored -- as I stream peace like waterfalls
into your channels

On the inside
I am a heartful dreamer 
I am devoted to simplify --
to solve -- to collect
our pieces
I am tickled to wish
as hell pours into us
blindly imagining you smiling
in serene water --

! I missed something… ?!
! Was I streaming deliriously…?! 

On the outside 
I am a heartful dreamer 
I am devoted to simplify --
to solve -- to collect our pieces
I am tickled to wish
as hell pours into us
blindly imagining you smiling
in serene water --

On the outside 
I lay on blessed green pastures, not near water, though,
I'll move indefinitely towards you -- 

! I missed something !


 
 


Written by Darkest Angel
Written December 31, 2018

 

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 Reviews of "Inside OUT"
Reviewed on January 4, 2019
Sometimes, even when we turn ourselves inside out for others to see, they still won't understand the person we are. Great thought-provoking piece of poetry.

Sandie

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 1, 2019
I believe I missed something. I don't really understand your emotions, "inside-out." However, you have expressed it beautifully.

Ron

Reviewed on January 1, 2019
The way you have crafted this rendition is completely intriguing , for me it brings up many thoughts of how many times I have been completely wrong about a persons character and yet inevitably attracted to them, your images are powerful , they stand out.


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