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A Star
by Gil Saenz → (All Poetry by Gil Saenz)
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Life is compared to a star's existence in the universe.



Our life is like
a tiny star
flowing through
the universe,
a passage of time,
a field of energy,
pulsating,
blinking on
and off.

Like a comet
always colliding
with new
unpredictable
mysteries,
filled with infinite
possiblilities
struggling for
identity
and fulfillment
in the
vastness.

 
 

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 Reviews of "A Star"
Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on November 10, 2008
Description of life's journeys. Excellent!
CarolHawks

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on November 9, 2008
A great poem you have written.take care

Edwin

Reviewed on February 18, 2007
Great Write!
and simply said, with wonderful imagery!

WArmly, WArrior Sheeeoox

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on January 29, 2007
Well done

Reviewed by Candy T (Reader)
Reviewed on January 28, 2007
a wise comparison employed intelligently, ty

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on January 28, 2007
this is fantastic! I love the thoughts within this poem.

Susan

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on January 28, 2007
I like how this gave the feeling of small and large, far yet close, nice.

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on January 28, 2007
That was a nice description of our life. Hope I can tumble through space for an eternity!


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