Even when
your baby sleeps
make her no promise
that you can't keep
Loving things are
meant when said
but rendered lies
by what's ahead
Do not think
your words too deep -
that knowledge fails
as she is weak
Her spirit life
is wide awake,
records all things,
make no mistake
Keep your peace
withhold that vow
lest words return
to haunt you
Now
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Reviews of "Bye Baby Bunting"
Reviewed by Pamela garner (Reader)
Reviewed on August 9, 2005
How true this is. Wonderful piece.
Pamela
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on April 24, 2004
How wise you are dear Kate to know how important our words are in front of our young. Many must think they cannot fo good or harm the one unborn. But we know they can. Excellent write. Bill
So true kate this one felt haunting also at the end. Excellent poem and message dear lady!
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on April 18, 2004
I used to play the boring bit in fantasier to my ex before seb, during her pregnancy, until I ;last saw him it was his fav' part of the film, then of course came love of dinosaurs. We saw many in forest, but they soon hid....honest son if you read this:)
Just great Kate....I have read that playing
classical music nearby while bearing a child
effects the unborn in some positive way...
my friend did that..and today her baby loves
listening to classical music..she seems to
recognize and react to it...wonderful write...
floria
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on April 18, 2004
Oh...how...TRUE!
Even the Bible records incidents of children "hearing" and
retaining words heard, while they were yet "in the belly" of
their mother.
A wise poem indeed!
Mary Angela Nangini's poems celebrate the richness of life and love. From the city to cottage-country and the roads in between, Nangini explores the changing seasons of her varied region. (This book will soon be reprinted in hard cover.)
Pamela
~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~
classical music nearby while bearing a child
effects the unborn in some positive way...
my friend did that..and today her baby loves
listening to classical music..she seems to
recognize and react to it...wonderful write...
floria
Even the Bible records incidents of children "hearing" and
retaining words heard, while they were yet "in the belly" of
their mother.
A wise poem indeed!