These are time warps;
Through The Looking Glass experiences...
So what, then, of those
who don't return;
who go into The Tardis
but do not come out again?
Back home
our real lives
will enter the time warp also
and evermore run
parallel
with the life behind
a mirror
that we know to be real
and yet which gives
no hint
of its own existence
as it stares unblinking,
reflecting nothing more
than our own real life
back to us
however hard we stare...
But it does blink -
and another life
is mysteriously absorbed
into The Warp,
creating another
Back In Reality
* * * *
Accidental or sudden death
Happens in an instant
Freezes in time for ever
Suspended animation
on both sides
of the glass -
tragic undercurrents and overtones and the child that dies young is young forever like peter pan and the old man that dies, is he forever old in our memory, or reborn in his prime behind the mirror? Some jet off to the bahamas and some jet off to Iraq to do their 'duty' and His will be done. Thought-provoking poem!
This is outstanding, Kate. You have created the feeling of suspension. Not told about it, but actually allowed the work to stand in its own. Great job!
Carmen :-)
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on August 12, 2004
Kate, you have composed an excellent timeless write. Nothing in that brilliant mind languishing in “Suspended Animation!” You and your brain are firing on all cylinders! It’s so great to read your challenging thought-provoking work! One can easily become suspended in time while trying to comprehend it and then being enthralled by its magnificence. Outstanding composition, Poet!
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Love Peg
You always get into the nitty gritty, and turn me inside out!
Awesome piece Kate!
A lot of allagories here, that sure leave one thinking
Carmen :-)
Truly makes one think - about time and life.
This one is thought-provoking and well-penned. Excellent indeed.
Sandie May Angel
love the last bit
good write
john+