Sorry - this is not a bundle of laughs and I'm not sure where it has come from... it was painful to write and maybe painful to read: hence the "rating". But, better out than in, they say - even if you don't entirely understand it (which I don't!!). Must be in there somewhere...
It is supposed to be an example of Prose Poetry and is after Charles Simic: "The Church Of Insomnia"
THE CHURCH OF LOST CHILDREN
We gaze wistfully up again to behold the original beauty of the magnificent stained-glass of the window of shattered dreams. Faithful ones sit in suspended animation, held within cavernous space where a small soul may yet be lost forever, whilst fixed to a detached seat of humiliation and shame.
Always in front is that holy and distant place where an unknown Father hides himself away; and, to the side, a chapel of Mother Mary: absent.
The baby-faced minister models outmoded, adult uniforms - several sizes too big, but which barely conceal a vulnerable child's body beneath. He shepherds his flock, line by line, guiding them determinedly through the Credo: "I am a Big Boy now... I am Somebody... I am feeling fine and over it..."
Meanwhile, the child who is "father-to-the-man", leaves to comfort the grieving old lady who is sobbing uncontrollably for her mother in the creche next door.
There's a little child rattling around in the most pompous of us, isn't there. I needed to reread this poem in order to rev up for the US elections coming up this year--wanted to see them all naked. I wonder what kinds of insecurities they're bluffing over--what shameful little secrets they hide with holy countenance.--hard year for all of this. Thanks--Charlie
This frightens me, its a scene I as a Christian would want no part of, but I imagine the players here, were not volunteers....life is like that, no?
I am alittle lost.......could you email me with a further explanation.....I have read this 4 times already plus the reviews...
help?
anita
pax
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on October 19, 2004
Kate, this is one very deep and insightful piece of work. Yes, most of the world is in a sad state because of false religion, and not knowing where the REAL "father, God" is. Yet the bible has spelled it out plainly...along with all the solutions to man's problems, written in prophecy plain to understand. It is these "false little boys" in cleric sheets, that have confused the masses.
An excellent piece of work Kate.
Have you had the chance to read "The Vatican Exposed"?
This is the most powerful piece of non-fiction I have ever acquired!
Quite profound, Kate, and the Church of Lost Children sounds like the place most of humanity seems to be hiding out in today, all over the world, and no matter what religion we belong to.
Kate ...I had to read this complex and cryptic prose / poetry three times to come to a conclusion on it...if conclusion is the right word...
Methinks this is a stab in the dark..at portraying the unwillingness or inability to graduate from being a child into an adult...especially in this unforgiving and Godless world...where everything is corrupt around us...
Also encroached on the mystery and invisibility of the Godhead .
That was my take on this enigmatic pen..
Peter
the words and images here are striking - "an unknown Father hides himself away," absent mother, the pretenders who must play at church or home and push aside their pain, the child grown up too soon... my mind was off and flying to society as mentioned below, to those who "play church" in order to avoid reality, to the pain we all carry within. Stirred sadness, anger, compassion and more... Great writing. PS - would love to hear your own interpretation of those last lines!
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on October 18, 2004
All I know is I felt the pain, the confusion and frustration. It was intense, painful to read and brought tears to my eyes, Kate.
how many parents have to work nowadays to pay bills, to eat, to survive, and the kids are left behind. heartbreaking, realistic write--thank you for penning this important piece.
Bless you, Eileen, for your insight. I think that I am stumbling towards the feelings that I have that many of us are still somehow "lost children", carrying our infant baggage of whatever damage we may have accrued into our adult lives where we play at "being grown up", whilst at the same time operating out of the emotional debris of our childhood experience. When I read this over the weekend to my fellow-students and tutors, the response was, to say the least, muted but intense. Thanks for the lovely "welcome home!" I hope I will be a little more cheerful tomorrow ;)))) TY Kate xx
To me Kate you have penned an amalgamation of todays family,
mother working father gone, kids left on their own, some
guided by those clergy many of whom can no longer be trusted
now wearing the modern garb of genderless society, while a
child cries because the crech it wants to view is no longer
allowed since the ACLU now dictates all things ungodly! Sorry if
I got it wreong, but I love what you said here and couldn't resist!;-)
Welcome back!
Asa D Seeley, a young Afro American man, shares his struggle to leave his past behind as he reaches for his future. In his one-of-a-kind style, he searches for answers...from the visible & invisible. A Memoir in Poetical/Prose form.
Rosetta was born in 1909 as the youngest of ten children. The family had more laughter than money and neighbors would knock on their door to ask, "Can we come in and laugh, too?"
Excellent title and an emotionally packed, well-defined write - superb!!
Robert
This is so powerful and Expressive...
thanks angel....
I am alittle lost.......could you email me with a further explanation.....I have read this 4 times already plus the reviews...
help?
anita
pax
An excellent piece of work Kate.
Have you had the chance to read "The Vatican Exposed"?
This is the most powerful piece of non-fiction I have ever acquired!
God Bless
Michelle~
TRASK
Methinks this is a stab in the dark..at portraying the unwillingness or inability to graduate from being a child into an adult...especially in this unforgiving and Godless world...where everything is corrupt around us...
Also encroached on the mystery and invisibility of the Godhead .
That was my take on this enigmatic pen..
Peter
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :( >tears <
how many parents have to work nowadays to pay bills, to eat, to survive, and the kids are left behind. heartbreaking, realistic write--thank you for penning this important piece.
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(
mother working father gone, kids left on their own, some
guided by those clergy many of whom can no longer be trusted
now wearing the modern garb of genderless society, while a
child cries because the crech it wants to view is no longer
allowed since the ACLU now dictates all things ungodly! Sorry if
I got it wreong, but I love what you said here and couldn't resist!;-)
Welcome back!