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Shock
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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In the style of Jacques Prevert


SHOCK


Doors slam
Engine revs
Gravel crunches and grinds

Pregnant pause

Fast acceleration
Diminishes distantly

Silence

Sudden collapse
Sobbing and shaking

Gone forever
The End 

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 Reviews of "Shock"
Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on December 11, 2004
quick, precise, effective. I'll have to research this poet. Never heard of him, but I like the impact here. Dawn

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on December 10, 2004
Wham bam........no more man! or mam

good stuff here Kate

vivid....i saw this in my minds eye.
pax A

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 10, 2004
J'adore Jacques Prévert, Kate. You have done a great job of immitating the style of this wonderful poet. I've only read him in French. Great job. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace to you. Reigs

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on December 10, 2004
Was an unbeliever, huh.

Reviewed by Linda Roman
Reviewed on December 10, 2004
great job with such few words

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on December 10, 2004
Try The Shock Of Another Christmas!

Excellent!

TRASK

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 10, 2004
i like the tightness of style and intensity of this poem ...

Reviewed on December 10, 2004
(((kate)))

a depth of power so profound...i'm shivering here from the force of your words...thank you

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(

Reviewed on December 10, 2004
Kate,

No "trial" regarding this stunning write - exemplifies poetic depthness and superbness ... outstanding!!

Best wishes,

Robert

Reviewed on December 10, 2004
I've never seen more powerful words in so few lines

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on December 10, 2004
Kate, unfortunately too many individuals run on impulse, and don’t realize that many long-term detrimental aftereffects occur because one’s anger has allowed rational behavior to go by the wayside. Your unique gift at bringing these emotional attributes into the open is a shining testament to your wonderful contribution to mankind. Thank you for sharing. Take good care and be well.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on December 10, 2004
A very powerful write.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 10, 2004
Stark reality well done!

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on December 10, 2004
Enjoyed. I like the "Pregnant pause" idea.

Reviewed by Janet Parker
Reviewed on December 10, 2004
Very brief and powerful, Kate.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 10, 2004
Shocking - but quite good!


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