"Hey, Kate... this has been done!"... yeah, but I cross my heart I wrote it, word for word, yesterday! Weird, huh?! Must be all the red meat we're eating! LOL Kate xx
DAYBREAK
My fluid flesh is woken
from a heavy drowse;
It's still dark, but a songbird
heralds the new day.
Our bed is an ocean where,
in these drifting moments,
I float like a downy, curled feather
carried by waves.
Skin gathers and tightens
as love's breath seeks me out.
Passion's silent rhapsody tunes me
taut as the string of a bow.
Within your encircling arms
I am so slight
I could be nothing more than imagination;
Yet it's my pulsating energy that fuels us.
Mute rhythms turn to thunder rolls
as the symphony drags me under;
Surfing the seabed
I am drenched in quicksilver.
I journey towards the centre of the earth's core
whilst exploring subterranean caverns
and searching the Halls of the Mountain King;
Then I swallow the orchestra whole...
* * * *
In this moment I am reborn,
fresh and as new
as the shimmering daybreak -
glad that you are an early riser...
I love the hook of the last line on this, Kate. Beautiful romance spun into a universe of expanded thoughts and emotions. Truly evolved passions flavor these delightful, image packed verses.
Take care,
Sherry
Yes Kate, it may have been done before but never in such a way as you do it. I can almost feel the afterglow of morning passion in your heart. Very well done and very enjoyable read. Thank you for lifting the blinds a little.
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Take care,
Sherry
how romantic and loving
beautiful images.......very clear actually!
you have a gift
:)A
*smiles* a most tender and passionate write--enjoyed
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Ron
Felix
A most captivating write, Kate.
PS "Karnivore Kate," Andy Says. HMM!