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Daybreak
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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"Hey, Kate... this has been done!"... yeah, but I cross my heart I wrote it, word for word, yesterday! Weird, huh?! Must be all the red meat we're eating! LOL Kate xx




DAYBREAK


My fluid flesh is woken
from a heavy drowse;
It's still dark, but a songbird
heralds the new day.

Our bed is an ocean where,
in these drifting moments,
I float like a downy, curled feather
carried by waves.

Skin gathers and tightens
as love's breath seeks me out.
Passion's silent rhapsody tunes me
taut as the string of a bow.

Within your encircling arms
I am so slight
I could be nothing more than imagination;
Yet it's my pulsating energy that fuels us.

Mute rhythms turn to thunder rolls
as the symphony drags me under;
Surfing the seabed
I am drenched in quicksilver.

I journey towards the centre of the earth's core
whilst exploring subterranean caverns
and searching the Halls of the Mountain King;
Then I swallow the orchestra whole...

* * * *

In this moment I am reborn,
fresh and as new
as the shimmering daybreak -
glad that you are an early riser...

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 Reviews of "Daybreak"
Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on December 28, 2004
Potent imagery here, Kate. Well done indeed!

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on December 27, 2004
I love the hook of the last line on this, Kate. Beautiful romance spun into a universe of expanded thoughts and emotions. Truly evolved passions flavor these delightful, image packed verses.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 27, 2004
what a passionate song of enlightened romance from within the orchestra within you ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 27, 2004
Exceptional! To be compared to the shimmering daybreak ...WOW! That is really a fantastic image! Splendid poem Kate!

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on December 27, 2004
Oh my!
how romantic and loving
beautiful images.......very clear actually!
you have a gift
:)A

Reviewed on December 27, 2004
(((kate)))

*smiles* a most tender and passionate write--enjoyed

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on December 27, 2004
Gotta get rid of that waterbed! Seriously, your images of love and lovemaking are fresh and unique.

Ron

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on December 27, 2004
Sounds like you both are and what a Christmas present.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on December 27, 2004
Yes Kate, it may have been done before but never in such a way as you do it. I can almost feel the afterglow of morning passion in your heart. Very well done and very enjoyable read. Thank you for lifting the blinds a little.

Felix

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on December 27, 2004
Imagery, passion, love at daybreak, this poem has it all. Well done

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on December 27, 2004
Excellent images, Kate.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 27, 2004
Reborn, fresh and new, in the morn.

A most captivating write, Kate.

PS "Karnivore Kate," Andy Says. HMM!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on December 27, 2004
Karnivore Kate. Morning glory huh? Hark the Heralds, sounds like morning fun fun fun...

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on December 27, 2004
Beautiful imagery, lovely and intense poem, Kate.


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