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Artist's Model 2
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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You guessed it - this follows on from Artist's Model(1)!
Am toying with the idea of doing a mini-sequence of these, on the theme of "in search of identity".
PS Race you to 2005... think I'll win if I'm, say, six hours' ahead?! :)) xx



ARTIST'S MODEL 2


She had been closed
Lost in deep darkness
Overwhelmed by pain's ocean
Undisturbed by time

In being made beautiful
she had become vulnerable
wide open
exposed


A single tear -
a grain of crystal sand -
birthed and trickled
from her eye's salt pool...

On his virgin canvas
in tones of light and shade
his watercolours released her:

A matchless pearl
perfectly formed
and flawless  

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 Reviews of "Artist's Model 2"
Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on January 28, 2005
I don't know how to review this
and I am dead serious

its beyond the usual, AD compliments.........
I am lost

and awed!!!!

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on January 3, 2005
Kate,

You definitely pen a masterpiece.

Reviewed on January 2, 2005
(((kate)))

your poetry is perfectly formed and flawless...O! to write like you

your words inspire me--thank you

(((HUGS))) and happy 2005 (i'm just a day late LOL), love, karla. :)

Reviewed by George Jackson
Reviewed on January 1, 2005
A wondefully crafted poem. I do hope you continue with the "identity" theme.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 31, 2004
you have merged sensuality and artisitic splendor marvelously!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on December 31, 2004
I don't find it even mildly warm.

But a masterpiece has been created here.

Self realisation. At someone realising they are a butterfly, not a catapilla...

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on December 31, 2004
Wonderful images, Kate. Happy New Year.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on December 31, 2004
Virgin Romantic Hot You!

TRASK

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on December 31, 2004
This is wonderful. Happy New Years to you.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on December 31, 2004
In the artists hands beauty is formed to delight the viewer.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on December 31, 2004
I feel and see this subject in my mind and long to watch as the artist like the writer unfolds her nature.

Felix

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 31, 2004
You capture this well Kate. I did a poem of the artist Titian's Girl,
half nude, from her point of view. It got a very good response. I think it's a fascinating topic. That's why I like to do challenges when it depicts art. I'm looking forward to more of these.Superb poem!

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on December 31, 2004
A matchless pearl formed and flawless. Well again I wonder about never have had posed nude. I posed once for an artist friend of mine. Don't know what happened to that picture.


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