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Artist's Model 4
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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I think you've probably got the hang of these! Mwah! Kate xx


ARTIST'S MODEL 4


He made them a fire.

She watched as the clothes
she had arrived in
went up in smoke:

Her stillborn past incinerated.

Instead, he wrapped her
in his own ample shirt,
which still bore
the fecund aura
of his muscular scent...

Nothing else was needed;
She was beginning to rise:

Aware that her slight physique
was starting to swell
like moistened grain,

She felt nurtured by his
freely-yielded masculinity;

Like a tender vine-dresser,
he was growing her at last
into the woman
she was destined to become. 

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 Reviews of "Artist's Model 4"
Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on January 9, 2005
wow are you good at these... you could publish a collection with somebody's artwork and yipee you'd have a bestseller. love your close on this one (no pun intended)

Reviewed by Joshua Miller (Reader)
Reviewed on January 7, 2005
Kate,
I want to stand in your shadow while you compose these monuments of poetry. Your use of license, word choice, placement, flow, and intent are all spot-on and as you might say, smashing! Resplendent in its style and content Kate! This is poetry to be admired by all!!! I really love and appreciate this bantam work.

Josh

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 7, 2005
Her stillborn past incinerated.

He was quite the sage artist - and this is yet another most captivating poem, Kate.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 6, 2005
excellent images of a work still in progress and being melded by the passions of desire and art ...

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on January 6, 2005
Sweetly {and hotly:)} intimate and metaphorically
spot-on. Glad I didn't miss this!! Pea <3

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 6, 2005
Kate you are developing into the master story teller with each write you draw us closer and closer to the artists studio and his canvas.

Great work,

Felix

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on January 6, 2005
Fecund aura? Does that mean he doesn't have B.O.?lol Nicely done

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 6, 2005
I agree with Anita, about the vicarious feel! You also
get so intimate that you make me feel almost voyeuristic;-)
Superb work Kate! Your artists are a bit Machiavelian ;-)

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 6, 2005
Looks like the butterfly will be airbourne soon.

As she realises her destiny....

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on January 6, 2005
More please
I feel like I am living vicariously (sp)
lol thru these..........sigh
lovely Kate.......
this is a love story, nuturing, romantic, evolving, spirtual, artistic, and trusting.......I sense a strong vine of trust here......
either way.......right or wrong.......
I love these!
pax A

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on January 6, 2005
My but this is the best one yet. Again your poetry is like eating potato chips betcha can't read just one.


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