Artist's Model 6 (poem) by Kate Burnside on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on January 11, 2005

I seem to be doing these backwards, Kate... they embrace and lure.

The tender, imaginative metaphors are evidence of the writer's grace-filled mind... you are generous with your gifts. My mind's eye savors each line. Lovely! katy xox.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on January 10, 2005

so beautifully intense and passionate. Wonderfully penned, Kate.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on January 9, 2005

such an artist knows when he has found his masterpiece, seduced by the beauty of the heavens and inspired by the shape of his passionate muse ...

outstanding poem!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 9, 2005

Kate this is sensual and seductive, I'm feeling
the heat rise, a beautiful passionate mood in this
painting! Love it!;-)

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on January 9, 2005

wow
loving these!

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on January 9, 2005

Okay Andy now well I would say that the artist sure picked his model right.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on January 9, 2005

Now what rhymes with venus? (Thinks..Ouch errr. Venus and mars.Cars)

So he drove home in his car..Nice gift Map of the stars..

Blighter not to let her keep his shirt, some blokes are just so cheap..

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on January 9, 2005

Wid N Off The Wall Navigation Painted Life Has No Meaning Write Right On!

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on January 9, 2005

Absolutely delightful write. Paul

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 9, 2005

(((kate)))

"...as dusk closed about them
and venus appeared
in a clear night sky

he needed no navigation
to find his way home" <-------STUNNING passion!

captivating! mesmerizing! enchanting! BRAVA!!!!!!!!!!!!! i applaud your mastery of the written word

i absolutely ADORE this one--the best one yet--please keep them coming?

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 9, 2005

This series has now gone cosmic - quite intriguing, Kate.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 9, 2005

Woman expressed as the stars in the sky is such a wonderful way to describe the beauty of not just the physical women but the woman as a whole.
Lovely and fitting tribute continues to unfold with this ending, marvellous Kate,marvelous.

Felix

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on January 9, 2005

Love the expression of thoughts and images you have created in this write.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on January 9, 2005

Some things just come naturally.