It's amazing the effect a day out at The British Museum can have on us English... "Don't go down to Egypt...!" Actually, I know this has been a long-suppressed response to Matchbox 20's "Push" - great tune and sentiment!
SPHINX
Please don't do it -
that thing that you do
that makes me want to suck
your insides out, starting with
your voice, your breathing.
Please don't make me
fall, crashing and beating
my tiny, clenched fists against
the ever-expanding expanse
of your chest,
kneading your shoulders.
Please don't cause me
to have to drag you down,
here and now, central
in this public place
and absorb you right into me:
carry you foetal beneath my skin
seven inches deep.
We are bones fused and ignited:
yours and mine.
Pounded into such fine dust,
pollen on the wind
unable to contain life's
tumult and energy within
the frail confines of flesh.
Sounds Like Bad Field Trip In School Never Was Much For Museums,i.e. Billions $$$ Spent Saving Artifacts---As For Saving Life,Little Children
Hey Go Chase (Save) Killer Whale...
wooooooooooooow! hey La sphinxa why didn't you pick me up;-)Okay I can say I was there through your superb re enactment...but darn it you get had all the fun;-) Tooooooo goooood lady Kate!!! Love, Eileen
Wow! Kate wow! wow! wow!(I sound like a dog lol) stunning, absorbing work well done you talented lady.
Paul;-]
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on February 21, 2005
This is very intersting poem and turned out a little different from my first impression of the title.
Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 21, 2005
that verse second to the last Kate was jut so good, super loved
We are bones fused and ignited:
just created that absorbtion, which you speak, and of course the plea of another asking, begging, for another, to refrain from te very iner selves they are, so very good, Al
i luv the intensity in this poem ... it is an impassioned imploration of an ardent desire to achieve the climax of a very wonderful afternoon ... great stuff here ...
Kate as usual you have found a delightful way to blend love, passion and lust in a sweet subtle way that wraps your arms around the reader and keeps them holding their breath until the very last word. Beautiful write sweetie,
Hugs,
Felix
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Reviewed on February 21, 2005
We are bones fused and ignited:
yours and mine.
Pounded into such fine dust,
pollen on the wind
unable to contain life's
tumult and energy within
the frail confines of flesh. <---- how good is that!
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talk about possessed
talk about impressed
talk about addicted
talk about great writing...............
well I just did! lol
right here on your page........ooooooooooh I lovessssss DRAMA!!!
APPLAUSE!
PAX
anita
Uniquely you - always resoundingly perfect ... excellent verse!!
Best wishes,
Robert
Hey Go Chase (Save) Killer Whale...
Unique N Different...
TRASK
A yearning that cannot be denied, your words pack such emotion and power--JAYS to write like you.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(
Paul;-]
We are bones fused and ignited:
just created that absorbtion, which you speak, and of course the plea of another asking, begging, for another, to refrain from te very iner selves they are, so very good, Al
" I can feel it coming in the air tonight"
Woohoo Kate, rip it up girl, you left me breathless just reading this wonderful offering, pity help your man :)
TY Love Ch'erie
Most sensuous, in the most unique way..
Hugs,
Felix
We are bones fused and ignited:
yours and mine.
Pounded into such fine dust,
pollen on the wind
unable to contain life's
tumult and energy within
the frail confines of flesh. <---- how good is that!
Inspiring to say the least! Fine poetry.
ty, Dani