Inner Smile (poem) by Kate Burnside on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on April 21, 2005

Dear Kate,
I'm in awe of your originality. The comparison between the ridges of the sand and the roof of ones mouth is a touch of genius. You've got a lot of people smiling here, incuding me. My smile is filled with admiration. You truly are gifted precious lady.
Love Chanti

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on April 20, 2005

Kate,

Poetess magnifique! Poetic excellence abounds in "Inner Smile!"" Loved this and all your poetry!!

Blessings,

Robert

Reviewed by Emeka Nwogu

Reviewed on April 20, 2005

This one is a stunner! I can feel every word of it.

Emeka

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci

Reviewed on April 20, 2005

Kate,

This is a very beautiful and sensual write! You have
captured the inner world magically!

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on April 20, 2005

When there is a glow within
it can't help but show without.

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by Helen Downey

Reviewed on April 20, 2005

Well written with great choice of words and imagery. I love walking along the sea shore with all that it has to offer.

Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*� Authors & Creations

Reviewed on April 20, 2005

Oh, this is amazing, exceptional poetry! Absolutely love the tiny wave image. Thank you, Kate.
Love&Light*
Alexandra*

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on April 19, 2005

Kate, this is an exceptional atmospheric poem smiling from within its own wonderful lucidity ...

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on April 19, 2005

lol
this just got me..........my kind of line

Like roof of mouth
explored by tongue,

such a private location, and unplanned movement......just like your sea :)
Intelligent and witty Kate..........and so YOU
pax A :)

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on April 19, 2005

your inner smile gave me a great, big outer one... wonderful

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on April 19, 2005

Lovely, lovely, lovely, Kate. It is that inner smile that seems to be our best friend sometimes; never an argument, just total and complete understanding.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on April 19, 2005

Oooooh...Nice!!!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 19, 2005

Exquisite rendering Kate, you sure have learned to
keep it lean and lucid,a masterful trait, very few
can accomplish and maintain their own style;-)

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 19, 2005

Kate,

There you go, taking us on magical journeys with the beautiful currents of your words...this is absolutely gorgeous! I have a big smile on my face right now--and I thank you.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on April 19, 2005

How many times I have felt that sensation while walking on the beach with my wife, Florence. Elegant poem

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on April 19, 2005

Simply Beautiful, I have a very big inner grin now...

A tiny wave nibbled
the bare toe I offered,
suckled like newborn
at the brest;

love it! Oh I play a mean guitar by the way, never mind air guitar, been in three bands...'let me see that dandruff' (makes horns with hand rocks until green in face lol)

Paul;-] Head going ten-to-the-dozen