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Shelter
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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I have been totally sidetracked by the beautiful song by Sara Brightman on Eileen's page today... so thank you for that, Alrisha!! This is the outcome - a bit scratch, but there you go... must get a quill sharpener... TY Kate xx ... Oh, it is, of course, another Artist and Model write: think their day out turned into a long weekend... :))



SHELTER


He kneaded her shoulders
with the strong tips
of his fingers and tongue,
absorbing her yoke of pain.

As his tears of empathy fell,
her vast ivory blades -
like splinted arms in a sling -
began to ridge like wave-lapped sand,
raising up softly-budding nodes
that erupted bloodless
through her smooth translucent skin.

Like soft ribs they extended,
rippled and flexed, becoming dressed,
weaving a feathered softness
that spread like holy fire
from each pointed, sharpened quill
through to pulsing vanes.

Magnificent her wings appeared,
so vast they eclipsed all light -
encompassing them both round about
in tender womb of night.

Suddenly she was eagle mother
stirring up their nest for flight,
holding them safe
in the lap of her pinions.

Icarus could not fall.
 

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 Reviews of "Shelter"
Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on May 26, 2005
Outstanding impromtu stuff Kate, the imagery is so tangible I wonder what Whitesnake will do for me (that's who's on at the mo...bit long in the tooth I know) prob not alot, still not 100% but should be back to full functioning idiot mode in next couple of week.

Paul;-]

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 26, 2005
Suddenly she was eagle mother
stirring up their nest for flight,
holding them safe
in the lap of her pinions.

Truly Kaptivating, Kate

Reviewed on May 26, 2005

Symbolistic-impressionist imagery, rhythm of harmony
on the speed of dream, make this "Shelter" a masterpiece.

I have enjoyed the reading of "Shelter".

Healthy Creative day, Poet!


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 25, 2005
the aperçu of your perspective is indeed empowered with superb imagery ...

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on May 25, 2005
..every time I visit your den I leave pondering.. hopeful and joyous..THAT, believe me, ain't no mean feat..wow!!!!
saved this one..ty Kate


Vesna*

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Reviewed on May 24, 2005
Kate,

I agree with Nordette, this is lovely
and very expressive!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on May 24, 2005
Lvoe the imagery you have used in this write!

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on May 24, 2005
Lovely, Kate. Wonderful imagery.

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on May 24, 2005
I agree that you took us on a trip that explores the depth of the song.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 24, 2005
Kate you have taken us here on a flight of fancy that opens the mind,heart and soul to what love and romance is meant to be. I can't say that I undrstand it fully but it sure makes my minda and imagination soar with the eagle of which you ended this work of art. Well done kid,
Pops

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 24, 2005
Thanks for the mention!;-) You are beyond superlatives Kayo Kate,
leaving me with the after effects of holding my breath while reading you. It has become a habit!

Love, knocked out,
Alrisha

Reviewed on May 24, 2005
Kate,

Stunning imagery--stunning poetry--again, you have surpassed yourself and made this one my new favorite! BRAVA, Poet!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Can you tell I'm saving this one as well?

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on May 24, 2005
Awesome work!

Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
Reviewed on May 24, 2005
How right "... Suddenly she was eagle mother ..."

I am reading this poem for the fourth times. Its so beautiful, Kate!!!

One last time ...

Sandie.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on May 24, 2005
Your words flow like honey on my toast and linger on my mind like a Gershwin tune.


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