I have been totally sidetracked by the beautiful song by Sara Brightman on Eileen's page today... so thank you for that, Alrisha!! This is the outcome - a bit scratch, but there you go... must get a quill sharpener... TY Kate xx ... Oh, it is, of course, another Artist and Model write: think their day out turned into a long weekend... :))
SHELTER
He kneaded her shoulders
with the strong tips
of his fingers and tongue,
absorbing her yoke of pain.
As his tears of empathy fell,
her vast ivory blades -
like splinted arms in a sling -
began to ridge like wave-lapped sand,
raising up softly-budding nodes
that erupted bloodless
through her smooth translucent skin.
Like soft ribs they extended,
rippled and flexed, becoming dressed,
weaving a feathered softness
that spread like holy fire
from each pointed, sharpened quill
through to pulsing vanes.
Magnificent her wings appeared,
so vast they eclipsed all light -
encompassing them both round about
in tender womb of night.
Suddenly she was eagle mother
stirring up their nest for flight,
holding them safe
in the lap of her pinions.
Outstanding impromtu stuff Kate, the imagery is so tangible I wonder what Whitesnake will do for me (that's who's on at the mo...bit long in the tooth I know) prob not alot, still not 100% but should be back to full functioning idiot mode in next couple of week.
Kate you have taken us here on a flight of fancy that opens the mind,heart and soul to what love and romance is meant to be. I can't say that I undrstand it fully but it sure makes my minda and imagination soar with the eagle of which you ended this work of art. Well done kid,
Pops
Thanks for the mention!;-) You are beyond superlatives Kayo Kate,
leaving me with the after effects of holding my breath while reading you. It has become a habit!
Paul;-]
stirring up their nest for flight,
holding them safe
in the lap of her pinions.
Truly Kaptivating, Kate
Symbolistic-impressionist imagery, rhythm of harmony
on the speed of dream, make this "Shelter" a masterpiece.
I have enjoyed the reading of "Shelter".
Healthy Creative day, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
saved this one..ty Kate
Vesna*
I agree with Nordette, this is lovely
and very expressive!
Pops
leaving me with the after effects of holding my breath while reading you. It has become a habit!
Love, knocked out,
Alrisha
Stunning imagery--stunning poetry--again, you have surpassed yourself and made this one my new favorite! BRAVA, Poet!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Can you tell I'm saving this one as well?
I am reading this poem for the fourth times. Its so beautiful, Kate!!!
One last time ...
Sandie.