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Egypt's Balm
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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This is a total splurge that I just need to get down and out! Requires major dissection, but there you go. Am getting into the tortured subjectivity of Anne Sexton; the kind of experience that is the agent of personal metamorphosis of almost mythical proportions is also supposed to be the theme of me work for the next semester, so if any of you guys have any suggestions as to what would be good subjects to address, I'd be pleased for some inspiration! Just a mere 60-80 poems' worth, that's all!! This is a good write for me today - I'm in agony with a badly twisted pelvis (don't ask!!) and can't sit down, so have to be quick... :( K xx


EGYPT'S BALM


In tattered rags of bleeding soul
her carnality is spent;
with last gasp and foaming mouth
she craves final absolution,
hungry to rise transfigured.

Out there, sometime, somewhere,
someone sucks her tortured brain
through breaths of flaming nostrils;
stripping burned threads of nerve-ends
through her swollen, soldered fingertips
he knaws the broken bone of her heart,
lovingly licking her wounds.

He's the One preserving her,
making her whole, intact -
honouring her fleshly fragility:
He mummifies her beautiful,
painting her detail with precision
in each painful operation.
She becomes an opened treasure,
discovered, recovered, restored:
a glittering display of the wealth
of a priest-king's sarcophagus.

He is the silent, saviour sphinx -
her confessor who,
seeing, hearing, speaking no evil,
absorbs her naked into himself,
casting her dregs into solar winds:
the desert-storm furnace that sears intensely,
then is forever gone.

Appearing, she will know him:
cleansed by fire her flesh will burn,
become consecrated ground;
her scorching sands will bathe full-flood,
her spirit drench for flight.

Passion in extremis;
Exodus;
The journey begun.

      

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 Reviews of "Egypt's Balm"
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on May 30, 2005
You been shagging to Elvis again Kate?



Beaut of a write buddy mate..

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 29, 2005
Having spent four days there, I love Egypt. She is as enigmatic as the heat rising from the Sahara sands.

Ron

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on May 29, 2005
mastery of word, form, content. WOW and you can do this when in pain???? wonderful work!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 29, 2005
masterfully conceived and crafted ... your poems are excellerating in imagery and content ... great stuff!

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on May 29, 2005
This is very mystical. I loved it.
Great write Kate!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 29, 2005
Passion in extremis - marvelous.

And inquiring minds truly do want to know you got a badly twisted pelvis - and we hope you feel much better soon, Kate.

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on May 29, 2005
Aww (((hugs))) for your hip and superlatives for another outstanding piece of work, dross this is not.

Paul;-}

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 28, 2005
Kate I'll keep your pelvis in prayer;-)(really)! I'd love to hear the story on it;-) This work is another of those that defies superlatives. I can only say Brava! Someday you'll become world reknowned, then I can say I knew you when;-)

Love,
Alrisha

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Reviewed on May 28, 2005
Kate,

I am applauding! I am sure you will receive many accolades for
this sensual and well executed write!

Anne Sexton, I am a huge fan and will be looking forward to reading
your work inspired by her writing!


Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on May 28, 2005
The descriptions in this write and knowledge of Egypt is fantastic.

My prayers for fast healing; concerning your pelvis.

I am looking forward to more writes developed through this flow.

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on May 28, 2005
Twisted pelvis, yeah. Ouch! School's putting you through the paces, Kate. Tortured souls and all that. LOL. I see the growth. Keep writing. :-)

Reviewed on May 28, 2005
Excellent write, Kate! This write is so well-told and well-presented.

Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 28, 2005
What a marvelous blend of imagery, history/geography, cultural awareness and passion that you have created in this super write. Good work kid,
{Pops)
Felix

Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on May 28, 2005
Kate, this is so very salient. Keep up the wonderful work! -- Jeff

Reviewed on May 28, 2005
Kate,

Sounds like you need some of that Egypt's balm for your pelvis. OW. I won't ask, but hope you feel much better, soon. *cringe*

I, too, am awed by the vision you've penned beautifully and masterfully. I'm saving this one, too. Thank you!

(((((gentle hugs))))) but much love and admiration, Karla. :)

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on May 28, 2005
I am left in awe, Kate. This is incredible work, alive and four-dimensional. One for the library...


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