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Replay
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Revisiting the scene
I scale the walls of your face,
run a ladder up to your eyes:
no one home.

Beating on the door of your chest
your heart is locked and barred;
I am left to wander down unlit hallways,
my footsteps resounding empty.

I search in vain for reassurance -
for your voice to stop, rewind;
erasing forever its ugly, harsh tones.

Let me hear instead an echo -
comforting, soft, elusive -
that fades your final black to white,
saying now:
"Not so, not so, not so..."

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 Reviews of "Replay"
Reviewed on June 13, 2005
((((Kate))))

A strongly penned, emotional write you pen...I hope you're ok. :(

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 12, 2005
Ohh sweet Kate if I could only offer you a flashlight in your search but I know only you alone must take this lonesome journey but...know that you have lots of friends cheering you on from the sidelines.

Felix

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on June 12, 2005
Superb metaphor here Kate, extremely profound.

Paul;-}

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 11, 2005
excellent, Kate ... i can hear your voice in this pensive poem ...

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on June 11, 2005
Oh if it was only so easy, to erase and replay a message with a different and endearing ending, Like I love you very much.

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
Reviewed on June 11, 2005
"Beating on the door of your chest, your heart is locked and barred;..." I love the metaphor usage, Kate. Thank you for sharing this dramatic write.
Jill

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 11, 2005
I like this deep subtle abusive imagery Kate!
Superb drama!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 11, 2005
Quite profound, and that is quite a powerful first stanza, Kate.


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