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Freefall
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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The scent of windfall fruit has been heady in the Indian summer heat of my West Country air today; always intoxicating at the best of times! And, of course, a reminder of my childhood... It is also Michaelmas - Feast of Angels Michael, Gabriel and Raphael: protector, messenger and guide respectively. Hence NO prizes for guessing my source, but this is obviously a "found" poem! A bit Artist and Model-y... at a stretch...! :)) K xx


FREEFALL


He gave up eternity
for one breath of her hair,
one kiss of her mouth.

She was his taste,
his touch:

“Sweet;
juicy;
soft on your tongue;
grainy, like sugary sand
that dissolves in your mouth.”

Made to fit together,
united they were a pear. :))
  

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 Reviews of "Freefall"
Reviewed on October 3, 2005
"City of Angels" comes to mind- Love that movie with a Passion- the pear brought her (MY Meg Ryan-Strong Sweet and Determined) and Nic together- even, closer- You stated this is fine fruitfullness Katie- Love it! A rapture of love! Love&Light,Sheeeoxxo

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 30, 2005
soft and juicy ... luv the double entendre ...

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 30, 2005
Delightfully creative and unique, Kate. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you.

Regis

Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
Reviewed on September 30, 2005
At first I thought you had mispelt "pair" then I read it again, thereafter I just had to burst out laughing! Kateeey! Lol!!! Beautiful sensuous and succulent write, sweets!

God bless,

Sandie.

Reviewed on September 30, 2005
Sweet write, Kate; very good!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on September 30, 2005
So very sensuous, a bite of a pear hmmmm...
sounds wonderful. ;)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 30, 2005
A very sweet and captivating tale, Kate - and Happy Michaelmas to you!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 29, 2005
You know just how to make the juice flow, sweet Kate
you're a peach;-)love this!

Eileen

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on September 29, 2005
So you did watch "City of Angels" didn't you? A lovely freefall of a poem! Dawn

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on September 29, 2005
Sweet and succulent, Kate, this one really whets the appetite! ;)
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on September 29, 2005
Oh Kate, I had pear trees in my backyard when I lived in Spokane. I have always loved them and this is perfect! I picture the lovers sharing the juicy bites as they kiss. MMmmmmmmm...oh, em...pardon
me, lol!

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on September 29, 2005
Tis'sweetly romantic dearest Kate, but Androgenous Angels taste of many things all of them sweet...lol cool write.

Paul;-) (I've been drinking lol)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 29, 2005
Sweet write...but too many pear can become very vocal.....right???

Lol!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on September 29, 2005
ROMANTIC AND CUTE TOO, GREAT COMBO

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 29, 2005
Plus don't forget Seth. He loves pears.
A bit of the COA here. Becareful riding yer bike..

Yup at last summer has arrived. Hear we have it for two days this year.

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on September 29, 2005
If I didn't know you better, I'd say you misspelled "pair". Good play on words! Loved this poem.

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on September 29, 2005
clever and yummy!!!


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