Well, it's got the mention of poetry in it, but I rather fancy a spot of short fiction! This is a beginning... if anyone has any ideas for a middle, I'll try to give it a whirl... and, who knows, it might even be concluded as well! On the other hand, perhaps the least said the better; just blame it on my hour's exercise this evening, releasing I don't know what after an 8-week lay-off! Have a good week, Folks. K xx
GET A GRIP…
“Life is not a poem, Kate”, Annie said, as the London bus lurched another twenty feet forwards under the heavy boot of the driver; obviously he had had another row with his wife last night and passengers would suffer…
“It so bloody well is…” Kate picked her apple back up off the floor and recovered herself into an upright position before her face took another broadside from the flapping jacket of the conductor who was struggling to maintain his sea-legs; he muttered “poetry” under his breath.
She polished up the apple on the lapel of her jacket and spoke through the first juicy bite: “Whether on the brightest mountain top or in the darkest abyss, life is just a succession of on-going moments, each one poetic in its way…”
The flick of a bristling newspaper on the back of her head marked the profound disagreement of the older gentleman behind. The woman in front leant her head against the greasy window, her heavy sigh delicately misting the glass. And the wide-eyed expression of the immaculately made-up woman opposite seemed to register a mute recognition, perhaps wondering if her particular “poem” might be about to expose details of the life of a lesser-known Conservative MP.
Kate sensed the rush-hour bus filling with the animation of words, spoken and unsaid; then emptying, spilling living rhyme as people got off and went their way. Poetry, like fragrance emitted from the Perfumery Department at Debenhams, was permeating and energising the early-morning city just as surely as low rays of winter sun slowly crawled their way up last-night’s streets…
Kate, Thanks for the wake-up call!
Excellent prose!
(I find out on Tuesday or Wednesday if I have Breast Cancer)
(13th or 14th)
I have been saying many prayers for you as well.
Becca
Poetry is not everyone's cup of Earl Grey, Kate,
forbidden fruit like Eve's apple, or dunno, just
don't understand it, mate! An inappropriate subject
for conversation on a London bus, it seems,
if the reaction here is anything to go by.
Humorous slice of English public life. :-)
Superb prose Kate, for a moment there I was ready to turn the next page of your poetic adventure, rather like a good novel, I was wanting more...The imagery is startlingly vivid, having endured the joys of buses at rush-hour I can well relate. Good job you didn't mention the aromatic smell of urine one usually finds on top decks Lol. Excellent stuff, girl your talent is boundless.
You know it's good... you're just being a tease... whetting our appetites this way. Tell us more... and more. This audience is made up of thousands who agree with you, and wait patiently for the next scene, bit, chapter... you write it, girl! - Bill
This is delightful and I'd love to read more. To you and (some) other writers, life's movements and the ludicrous behavior of human beings are poems and paintings waiting to be expressed. So many don't see this. I'm sorry for them, but they don't know what they're missing anyway, so I shouldn't pity them. xxxxoooo Janet
Oh sweet Kate you have grasped a line that you must continue here, I believe you are so right that all life is a series or can be applied as poetry whether it's good or bad, happy or sad, evil or saintly, love or hate. I can see you continuing this into a whole days translation of life into that poetry as you did the strong charcters you used on the bus, the scents in the air then to your office, coffee break, lunch and eventual return bus trip with Anne. By the way thank you for the review of my last poem which provided such rich and wonderful visual affects of you. (Dirty old man lives here.)
Hope you are feeling much better now and returning to your old self again.
Hugs and snuggles,
Pops
life is poetry to those who sense the subtle shifts of grace everywhere. my antennae always go up when somebody tells me to get a grip; I find I actually do better in loosening mine and embracing life in its fulness. interesting delivery. take care! Dawn
Still Living on my Feet is the follow up to Tichaona Chinyelu’s first book, In the Whirlwind, which was rooted in a sense of hard-hitting revolutionary black love. However, in this sophomore effort, Tichaona brings the revolutionary essence from deep
Still Living on my Feet is the follow up to Tichaona Chinyelu’s first book, In the Whirlwind, which was rooted in a sense of hard-hitting revolutionary black love. However, in this sophomore effort, Tichaona brings the revolutionary essence from deep
A people’s heart can be found in their poetic words. In history men and women have stood firmly upon their soapboxes and street corners, rallying the deepest beliefs of people to rise up and be heard. The poetrypages.com has offered that voice a new
God bless,
Sandie.
Excellent prose!
(I find out on Tuesday or Wednesday if I have Breast Cancer)
(13th or 14th)
I have been saying many prayers for you as well.
Becca
Tami
forbidden fruit like Eve's apple, or dunno, just
don't understand it, mate! An inappropriate subject
for conversation on a London bus, it seems,
if the reaction here is anything to go by.
Humorous slice of English public life. :-)
More, more, more! I was RIGHT THERE! You have such talent for bringing reader into your words--BRAVA!
(((((((HUGS))))))), love and prayers, Karla. :)
Saving this--you're quite popular in my library :)
Great stuff!
(((Gentle Hugs))) and much love (and prayers), your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
Yup I guess everything is a muse..
Paul;-)
Love It!!
Love Tinka
Eileen
profound capture of getting a grip on the mood of such an event ...
Hope you are feeling much better now and returning to your old self again.
Hugs and snuggles,
Pops
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)