I love what the N and O stand for, Kate. Very descriptive! A powerful write - I reckon its not aimed at teenagers, but I feel it would do them good if they read this - to help them stand strong and not to succumb to peer pressure et cetera.
Ah... Kate! You are a master of descriptive language. In just a few strokes you set up the scene like nobody's business. As far as strength, both physical and psychic, well I agree with Robert. Gosh! I think I could go on forever. I think I'll stop now. But I liked it... can you tell? LOL
your determination not to allow anyone to force their will upon you is admirable to say the least ... you never know what lurks in the surrounding darkness, so always keep on guard ... this is applicable to the physical as well as psychic realms ... potent poem, Kate ...
Darlin Sage! Yeah, I still prefer chaps... cos, funnily enough, when I wrote this I felt that the natural assumption would be made that this is a male/female thing but, in actual fact, I have to say that in my experience of life sadly I have known more subtle emotional abuse from predatory females than I have from blokes. Have no idea why... or maybe I'm just more able to get my head round the way chaps operate, having three very teasing older brothers. Or perhaps I'm just a more male female myself... or sumthin??!! Anyway, whatever... "Just back off" is a powerful message that needs to be conveyed to anyone who seeks to overthrow our personal space and sovereignty. And I speak from the heart here... this goes very deep with me. K xx
I'm guessing this is not the same stud muffin in Black Beauty you wrote, "Taking the stars from her eyes he attached them to his heels." Sounds like he's a mud stuffin! Do you still prefer chaps?
LOL!
Sage
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2006
hahahaha...some never get the message, Kate. That's why we are so adept at knowing instinctively where to kick.
I too get fiery when someone tries to inflict their will upon me, especially when I have stated plainly that I have no use for them at this time or in this situation. We must stand our ground or give up a piece of our self that we have no desire to lose. High Five Kate! for sticking to your guns and letting them know, in no uncertain terms, that you are a force to reckoned with. A strong write that reveals a side of you that we don't often see in your offerings.
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2006
Bet this never happens again, I loved it I agree priceless piece. :)
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2006
LOL. I get visions of Barbara (Felicity Kendall) in the good life, throwing one of her paddies.. I guess you don't have an NHS dentist.
NO!! Thought that meant not open.... Bet someone eyes are watering.lol
Kheer up Kate..
Yeah!- for Kate!!! Where is that SOB? Your men-type friends will beat the shorts off him! I do hope this is not from real life, but if it is or isn't, damn if you did do the right thing...in double time! Great going, Lady! Now, we're all warned to skate around Kate...or... Yeooooooow!
.... I admire, and would like to use, those last five lines. - Bill
Oh Sweet Kate now this is a side of you I have never seen so my little friend has a temper. A wise man will do well to remember that although I have never been very wise when it comes to women. lol Nice write and a bit different for you but I like it.
You Kick 'em in the nad's girl, lol...no one messes with our Kate. I'd hate to see you when your mad (angry sense)...we know your a loon lol;)N O spells NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
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God bless,
Sandie.
TD
Carmen :-)
(((HUGS))), love and many, many prayers, Karla.
Regis
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
LOL!
Sage
cute poem...and a wonderful rant...
Take care,
Sherry
NO!! Thought that meant not open.... Bet someone eyes are watering.lol
Kheer up Kate..
Yeah!- for Kate!!! Where is that SOB? Your men-type friends will beat the shorts off him! I do hope this is not from real life, but if it is or isn't, damn if you did do the right thing...in double time! Great going, Lady! Now, we're all warned to skate around Kate...or... Yeooooooow!
.... I admire, and would like to use, those last five lines. - Bill
Hugs,
Pops
ahh Glenfiddich!
love it!
Paul;-)
Hugs
George
I wouldn't want to upset your applecart Kate..lols
Peter
or the “O” for
“Over my dead body!”?
Very clever...thanks now I also understand the word.....lol!!
Love Tinka