OK, I know... this isn't for children and should probably be retitled "Insatiable"... but, hey, it's the best I can do as my contribution to the Feast and I probably would not have posted this at any other time. So blame it on The Day! :)) LOL Kate xx
NURSERY RHYME
“Four and twenty blackbirds baked in a pie”
The nest still warm, afterwards
I hold your drowned fledgling
cupped and sticky in the palm of my hand,
its little head drooped as though stillborn.
Later, heat and energy revive;
like fermenting yeast, so our love is:
bubbling, it bursts through our fingertips
as you need me like dough
and I rise, pregnant with appetite.
Resurrected, your damp chick has grown;
finding its wings it’s sky-bound again –
each time more satisfying than the last,
it grows stronger with every flight.
Well, I've read it now and must say it is like all your poetry. Afresh with new, not old, inventive phrases that bring the subject to life. Thanks for the heads up on this poem. I'll quit while I'm...never mind. Enjoyed
Rusty
PS And please stop baking those blackbirds in those pies. Thanks, Kate.
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on February 14, 2006
Very true, don't it just get better and better when you enjoy the fruits of wedded bliss with your life long soul mate. For sex with a true soul mate does have a intense spiritual quality, as well as a physical..
Enjoy the delights of magical nights. Such a perfect God given gift.
Brilliantly expressed..
Ohh la la Sweet Kate, hot stuff, I know your imagery got my little birdie all flutterry if you'll excuse the pun. Seriously a tasty little offering for Valentines Day. Thank you for sharing.
I honestly did not get this until I read others' comments and reread the uh, poem. And I am sitting here eating a late night snack--- a banana. Yuk!!!! Well, you got my attention and I'm afraid I can't shake it. ;>)
You are sooooo bad/good/bad...Scintillating write, Kate...It is Valentines Day, so whip up that special treat and work it...and don't forget to keep your eye on the birdie.
Take care,
Sherry
Errrrr, what kind of wine is it that you drink again? Please send me a case. Talk about your lava under the mantle. My goodness! or should it be my badness! LOL ~~Nordette
A very passionate and sensuous pen for St Valentine's Day Kate !
You set the Den alite tonight in spectacular fashion
This is a great start to my evening's reviews !
Is it a self raising mix...:)
Peter
Even Saint Valentine is blusing... with PRIDE, of course!
This is a lovely and natural subject in the the hands of a proven poet, and I am blushing with something akin to, envy... dammit.
So appropriate for this day and what it means to mortals... in flight!
- Bill
Sensuality, thy name is Burnside! O, the naughty images that were playing in my mind as I read your tantalizing verse...I'm going to go soak my brain now. In soap. LOL
Bloody brilliant, your poetry...BRAVA! Bet you're going to get a lot of rising...ummmm...LOLOLOL Yeah. :)
(((HUGS))) and love, and Happy Valentine's Day, love, Karla.
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Paul;-)
I spilled my coffee reading this.
Love it!
that's dangereous.
PS And please stop baking those blackbirds in those pies. Thanks, Kate.
Enjoy the delights of magical nights. Such a perfect God given gift.
Brilliantly expressed..
Not saying what I read here..."its little head drooped as though stillborn......lol.....whahahahahahahaha!!
Love Tinka
Sage
Pops
Take care,
Sherry
it. You'll have to send me the recipe goth gitl;-)!
Eileen^
~~martin~~
*gasping for air*
Good LORD, Lady, This. Is. HOT! HOT! HOT!! I think you melted my GLASSES! LOL HOT passion comes from your pen; BRAVA!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
Saving it! :)
You set the Den alite tonight in spectacular fashion
This is a great start to my evening's reviews !
Is it a self raising mix...:)
Peter
This is a lovely and natural subject in the the hands of a proven poet, and I am blushing with something akin to, envy... dammit.
So appropriate for this day and what it means to mortals... in flight!
- Bill
Blame it on "the Day," eh? Riiiiiiight. LOL
Sensuality, thy name is Burnside! O, the naughty images that were playing in my mind as I read your tantalizing verse...I'm going to go soak my brain now. In soap. LOL
Bloody brilliant, your poetry...BRAVA! Bet you're going to get a lot of rising...ummmm...LOLOLOL Yeah. :)
(((HUGS))) and love, and Happy Valentine's Day, love, Karla.
SAVING THIS ONE!