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Winter Tree
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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As you may see from my word usage, this has been totally inspired by a combination of AJT's remarkable poem, One Thousand Women, and the response made to it by Anessa's powerful mind and pen. So... into the melting pot this goes! Thanks, you two! :)) K xx


WINTER TREE


She is Atlas,
map-etched bark
of her saturnine trunk
straining upwards,
dividing bony-fingered
to cradle knuckles of planets
and gemstone rings of stars.

Stripped cleaner than a soul,
she’s all angles and curves:
sin-purged hollows and
spirit-filled mounds.

Day’s shadow collects
in bowls of her arms;
light darts from taut boughs
or filters through knots
of her sweat-tousled hair.

Birds roost in her heaving ribcage,
syphoning air and
spilling out song

as twilight reclothes her
(skeletal, transparent)
in skin – colour of fruit’s
weathered bruise and blemish.




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 Reviews of "Winter Tree"
Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on December 29, 2008
Captured in a sensual way...bare trees of winter. Amazing use of words

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on March 12, 2008
Brilliant imagery and write. The details just are beyond belief. Liz

Reviewed on March 12, 2008
I've read it three times Kate and I know I'll read it again. This is poetic class, gorgeous write.

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on March 12, 2008
sigh
wish I wrote it!!!
pax A

Reviewed on March 10, 2008
A truly magnificient description of a Winter Tree. Your imaginative words create a spell-binding effect on finding that tree. Oh, my! It's right in my own back yard.

with smiles in my inkwell
Micke
(who'd ask you to write on the Spring Tree! Or EACH Season tree, for that matter)

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 9, 2008
definitely caught my interest hanging onto the imagery in this poem, Kate ...
congratulations to you!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 9, 2008
Harsh sweetie girl. You know what I mean. Love u lots, Kate.

Regis

Reviewed on March 9, 2008

Kate I enjoyed your personification of "Winter Tree"
Wonderful and continued blessings and creativity.

Sincerely,
~Gwendolyn


Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on March 9, 2008
I love this imagery, it makes me feel stronger reading it, one for the library.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on March 8, 2008
Wonderful words that you share with us Kate, Thank you.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on March 8, 2008
Whilst having fun trying to log on, of late, I've read this many times. It reminds me of looking at the same tree over n over again.
I have a fav tree, donkeys old, yet everytime I look at her she is never the same. It hit me, or poems are like that, alive with intrigue, and multifaceted. Within this poem I see the trees of Narnia and also the allegory, within the within.... Yet on the simplistic level, I see the perfect discription of a tree, a tree that everyone knows, but is different to everyone. How we all see the same tree of life yet with our own unique paradigms....

As with other writers of your gender, I love how women see life, as we do seem bereft of lady poets in the main, throughout history.

I don't think you realise your own brilliance.

Reviewed by KJ McPhee
Reviewed on March 8, 2008
yes, Kate, a good attempt at tree mysticism. The best I ever read was Louis Simpson's The Redwoods... mountains are moving, rivers are hurrying, but we are still, we have the thoughts of giants, and at night the stars.... good to read you again my old friend, thanks to web proxies I'm able to access AD, but not edit or add poems as yet, but just seeing authorsden again is a blessing. I'm still teaching English and enjoying dumplings in China. Hope you are getting all the encouragement and praise you desire, Katie. kenny

Reviewed by Nicky Goodman
Reviewed on March 7, 2008
What an amazing tree she is - amazing poetry Kate, wonderful images of Life! in an image often thought dead, or evokes thoughts of death - but you are Kate the fantastic, and so is this Winter Tree! Bravo :o)Nicky xxx

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on March 7, 2008
Kate, This is absolutely an amazing write, I read it 3 times,, You are gifted.
Love, Christine

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on March 7, 2008
Atlas hmmmm? Love those muscles KB! I am sure glad that Helen Reddy didn't get a hold of this special expression of esteem and orchestrate it. This is a fine write that strokes the senses and the intellect. And I love that word 'saturnine' and all of its dark glowering brooding ill-humoured machinations.
Blessings and love ...
RC

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on March 7, 2008
'to cradle knuckles of planets
and gemstone rings of stars'
Love that and we are also trees...
Beautiful Kate!

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on March 7, 2008
I feel as though I know this tree inside out and back to front...Awesome write here Kate, and if that's winter, I'd love to see Spring or Summer. Excllnt xxx Ch'erie

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 7, 2008
I like it; I like it!

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on March 7, 2008
Spirit-filled this syphoning of symphonic_airing thou bring`ith forward..~..voelovel ~.~ Ted

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on March 7, 2008
...in your wonderful pen...the base winter...saturnine...becomes a tree of life.
descriptive metaphor of the highest Kate...
John

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on March 7, 2008
Through light and splendor it all springs to life....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by H Cruz
Reviewed on March 6, 2008
I'll never see tree's again, just symphony!

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on March 6, 2008
Great writing sweet lady,take care ...Hugsss

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on March 6, 2008
wonderfully visual--what power as well as beauty i see in this write

Reviewed by R Beeman
Reviewed on March 6, 2008
i must agree, very visual. deep and moving as my eyes close and i dream your words in my mind.

always,
randy

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 6, 2008
The images sink into the mind with the power of a camera flash going off suddenly in ones eyes...strong and intense bringing the tree to life in all it's glory. I gazed out my window yesterday only to see the forest of trees behind me covered in a glassy glaze of ice that sparkled in the sun as if the scene were done in pure crystal. Great write Sweet Kate...love it.
hugs
Pops

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on March 6, 2008
Exceptional visuals Kate...your pen is truly tipped in talent

Carole~

Reviewed by Louisa Dobbins
Reviewed on March 6, 2008

Reviewed on March 6, 2008
Kate,

My mere words cannot adequately review this except to say "perfection" - and it is -

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on March 6, 2008
Kate, oh the beauty of the images in this writing & I love the metaphor...such great imaginations you have and your words bring a beautiful scenairo to life to cause this reader to savor every line. I would say this is some fine poetry.

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on March 6, 2008
And a long sigh from me... my knuckles gnarled too, picturing-- roughing out in my own space the outlines of the scene you paint. "Bowls of her arms"... "heaving ribcage"..."syphoning air and spilling out song" (was that ever visual)... "fruit's weathered bruise and blemish" (I see a dried fig, and compare it to that purplish brown, vertical ribbing of her bark) and "to cradle knuckles of planets and gemstone rings of stars"... " are your best lines... well, that's pretty much the whole poem. See how you are? Are there any images left out there for the rest of us?

Seriously though, don't you just love the infinite power of creation... in all its forms...?

Loved the poem. I'll pocket it to peruse now and again, if you need it back, just ask...

--Charlie

Reviewed on March 6, 2008
Very well penned yet again, Kate; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by Boots Dorfman (Reader)
Reviewed on March 6, 2008
Sweet. And thank you.

Yer unindicted coconspirator,
Boots

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on March 6, 2008
No wonder every poem of yours that I find myself drawn unto leaves me reeling - it's your genius that shines through the words as well as the space around the words....Wonderful!


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