This just dribbled out of my head whilst stirring the supper a couple of weeks' back... No, it wasn't curry, but it oozed masala-like as Eric Clapton's Running On Faith played on the radio... :)) xx
PS It is, for me, a strict kind of form though I don't know if it's a "real" one? Title 4-4, then three tercets 4-5-6 followed by a couplet 4-5 and single line 6. Don't think I planned that... it just fell out that way!
MAKIN SUMTHIN
OUT'A NUTHIN
“Baby”, you say,
“we ain’t got nuthin
‘cept imagination.”
“Honey”, you drawl,
“we got no road ‘cept
tomorrow’s unlit path.”
“Sugar”, you croon,
“we ain’t no-one but
two bread-sharin travellers
Nice work Kate...isn't it funny how those thoughts fall into our minds, willing our need to express the imagination as you so well show the simpleness and the enormity of those words giving yourself and the reader a view into the creativity of that burning fire deep within us.
runnin on faith
seeking out truth,
those two lines express and expose the very heart of one's soul, very nice Kate...
Me likes it a lot, this is sumthin out'a heck of a glowin' n' sparkin' poetic mind, that ain't afraid a' lettin' it flow n' flow n' flow, 'cause she got fire always in the heart!
{{{{{hugs}}}}} n' xxxxx
Alexandra*
All Dorothy had was a yellow brick road ahead and faith in her heart. Let your imagination work overtime in the dream factory!
the hit factory where Clapton has been running on faith remarkably well.
I like it and think that again you come up with such passionate but real words for the everyday people, I could easily see this being the backbone of a great song for the likes of Springsteen, Billy Joel or yea even Eric Clapton. Great to see you back and spreading the ink my dear friend Kate.
Big Canuck hugs to you,
fee
A traveling song, for sure, Kate. Hand-in-hand, eyes closed, and stepping off the precipice of the moment, and into the future... I'll bet you fly. --Charlie
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Regis
Love, Christine
Love Tinka
Funny how things just pop into the ole grey matter hehe.
Here's to all the sumthin's
:) Ch'erie
runnin on faith
seeking out truth,
those two lines express and expose the very heart of one's soul, very nice Kate...
Art Sun...
{{{{{hugs}}}}} n' xxxxx
Alexandra*
Peace,
Dan
Newfie hugs, Rose
Got a good beat, I give it a ten. Starting from scratch works for me. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
the hit factory where Clapton has been running on faith remarkably well.
EDWIN
Thank you, Kate.
John
{{{hugs}}},
Leland
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Big Canuck hugs to you,
fee
Be always safe,
Karen
Cryssa
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D