Me and I, the stream of daily thoughts. Watching the wheels go round.
Watching you watching me! I and I, this poem will strike a few chords with readers, Kate!
..intriguing write Kate... this is expertly written..and does indeed give one to ponder.... I feel a bit spooked when I read this...:) Happy Halloween
Love, Christine
This is not just spooky Kate... It's philosophical.
Maybe it's just me, but spooky implies a more physical and, in a way, superficial kind of reaction. The questions that rise here are deep and complex, not just spooky. :) That first stanza is very intriguing and sets the tone.
Sweet Kate, your words capture the questions of a thousand lovers who wonder what shall become of two hearts pairing as one. This is indeed captivating and fresh.
hugs
Fee
Under Amber Skies, written by author and poet Jill Eisnaugle, is a wonderful collection of rhyming poetry guaranteed to please every reader. In this, her second book, she writes of new friendships kindled, as well as old friendships solidified. She g
My book of poetry is being redone by me, I have a beautiful cover designed and the book will have a few more than 200 poems in it. I am going to have it printed on demand here in Canada. When it is done I will let you know when it is done and if anyo
Watching you watching me! I and I, this poem will strike a few chords with readers, Kate!
Love, Christine
Maybe it's just me, but spooky implies a more physical and, in a way, superficial kind of reaction. The questions that rise here are deep and complex, not just spooky. :) That first stanza is very intriguing and sets the tone.
Axilea
hugs
Fee
Love and {{{hugs}}},
Leland
Eileen
of those we love. Happy Hallow's Eve. -gene.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Happy Boo Day to you too! *BOO!*
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D *Mwaaaa haaaa haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa*