Bless you, America! :)) As a watcher in the wings, I so feel your exuberant hopefulness and optimism for change, with the desire for a new unity being a striking feature. Dream large, People, and embrace encouragement. The world indeed has to work together to usher in the "good new days". My thoughts are with you, Mr President. xx (I bet he's an avid Reader!) :))
SEWING A DREAM
Now the gates of day are closing,
the walls of night advancing,
I have need to unpick memory
right back to its first dropped stitch,
its last faded inspiration,
its inadequate wobbly seam.
Now the halls of dark approach
and corridors of light diminish,
I’ll present myself wide-eyed,
stripped to bare forgetfulness,
smooth-draped in sleep and
soft-wound in harbinger winds.
Dear Kate...It's always great to read your works...This is yet another wonderful write from you...I just adore your works for their depth and their humanitarian values...thanks..yeah God Bless America....its a wonderful nation for sure!!!
"Now the halls of dark approach
and corridors of light diminish,
I’ll present myself wide-eyed,
stripped to bare forgetfulness,
smooth-draped in sleep and
soft-wound in harbinger winds"
Kate we are at the threshold of a new beginning, a time where either we join hands together or go our separate ways and continue on the same path. I am an optimist and always have been so I see a future where people change and become that emotion called positive attitude, a quality that can carry us into future prosperity, whether financially or spiritually, the unity of those in the political arena is that much more important now than at any other time in our history. Sewing a dream brings forth that idea that we can be put back together to follow a leader who with God's help and our prayers will unite the divided and sew us back together again.
Mr. Obama has a monumental task ahead of him; his success is crucial not only for his country but for the whole world. Thank you for sharing your precious sentiments, Kate. Love and best wishes to you,
Kate I honestly have never read anyone more gifted in metaphors. This is so lovely. I hope also a new page has turned for our country, thank you for the well wishes.
My favorite stanza...the second one. So many memories it brings to mind! (Obviously had to unpick a few too many stitches in my time.) I hope that all of us might unite and come together in softness and hope for the future...
Cryssa
I am glad Obama is President.It was such a beautiful moment when all races,colors,creed and ethniciy joined together as one to celebrate the victory.Change is indeed what this country need and will get in more ways than one.take care
Beautiful words of hope; I didn't vote for Obama, but I pray he can reunite our nation once again! All we can do is pray for him, pray for our nation! God bless America again~ And God bless our new president to be!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :)
Hope shines in these beautiful lines: well done! Even though I didn't vote for Obama (yeah, yeah, I know ... LOL), I pray that he can lead us back to where we once were: the UNITED States of America. Going to be tough before it gets better ... but change may be what we need.
Using Calgary as a backdrop the author satirizes the self-serving nature of the public as it continues to fatten itself, not only physically, but egotistically as well.
Sheila
You have 'sewn' a masterpiece, and we the readers have reaped the benefits!!
Hugs,
Lance
we have something to build on here.
"Now the halls of dark approach
and corridors of light diminish,
I’ll present myself wide-eyed,
stripped to bare forgetfulness,
smooth-draped in sleep and
soft-wound in harbinger winds"
I salute you Kate...love n luck...BHUWAN!!
Great write Kate...
Art Sun...
(and there must have been something amiss with AD, because somehow I got no notice of this one until today...?)
Regis
Newfie hugs, Rose
Love, Christine
beautiful and gifted knowledge of poetry!
A delight to read,Kate...Eileen
Walt
Cryssa
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Marge Fulton
ALL ROADS LEAD OT HAZARD
Edwin
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :)
Hope shines in these beautiful lines: well done! Even though I didn't vote for Obama (yeah, yeah, I know ... LOL), I pray that he can lead us back to where we once were: the UNITED States of America. Going to be tough before it gets better ... but change may be what we need.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.