Kate....It's time to compile these gems in a book and let the whole world read you...do it soon please...the more I read you, the more I grow as a poet...thank you for showing the way...cheers...love n luck...BHUWAN!!
Jolly good Kate! Made me feel as if I was in Lord of the rings and Star Wars battling evil and seeking all that is right while staving off the dark side! Merry CHRISTmas to you and yours from Houston dear!
*Glen*
IT IS USUALLY THROUGH 'AGED' WISE EYES THAT WE SPY...WHAT WE'VE LOST...BUT STILL WHAT WE HAVE. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS YOU AND YOURS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
I'm imagining the large eye from the unfortunate series of books called, "The Unfortunate Events". I just watched the iffy movie today-- that eye caused some fires though--so better watch that gaze.
To continue with the pun--
This poem is very focused. Every line is concentrated with visual imagery. It has an intense effect on me; I find myself sinking deeply into the eye (I?) within it, and love the perspective.
My metal/mesh eyes gleam with admiration from their peripheral lines of (in)sight. --Charlie
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on December 22, 2009
My, my, my ~ absolute charisma. Your words captivate, unsettle, and intrigue in an almost Poe fashion. I love the first two stanzas in particular in both sound and substance. I love how you've used the word "peripheral." I shall print this poem on ivory linen stationery and place it in my book of favorite writings. This, dear Kate, is a gift - yours and ours.
sight far beyond the ability to see -- as we spy beyond the rim of sight to the periphery of imagination's eye -- well Kate, I can say with twenty-twenty vision that your vision is acutely accurate and splendidly creative in one brief glance -- this work of yours, is of the good stuff -- peace and love to you my dear friend -- Jon Michal
Kate, I love these lines, "truth unsheathes a sword against cowardice and lies,"...you always provoke so much thought...beautiful writing, as always, Kate.
Truly intrigued in descriptive mastery! Wow!
How I love your iris's rims! and, YES! the immortal does this to us...leaving us in awe!
So enjoyed~
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
There is always msytery, romance, uncertainty and excitement just outside our vision. We thrive on seeing what is around the next bend. This write captures soooo much Kate...well done indeed.
fee
A very intricate weave of words. Be Well Always, Carin
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on December 20, 2009
Ah, dwelling within is a treacherous game to play, but we have no other recourse but to play it, do we Kate? You are masterful when it comes to abstract poetical musing, and the real wonder of your thoughts are that they are founded in the fertile earthiness of your mind.
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*Glen*
Eye-eye, poet!
Merry Christmas!
To continue with the pun--
This poem is very focused. Every line is concentrated with visual imagery. It has an intense effect on me; I find myself sinking deeply into the eye (I?) within it, and love the perspective.
My metal/mesh eyes gleam with admiration from their peripheral lines of (in)sight. --Charlie
May you and yours be blessed with God's best gifts this Christmas and throughout the New Year!
Love,
Eileen
Georg
PS: The Pete Hamill in my quote is an American writer and journalist.
against cowardice and lies"
How I love your iris's rims! and, YES! the immortal does this to us...leaving us in awe!
So enjoyed~
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
fee
Regis
against cowardice and lies
Eye love it, Kate.
-gene.
GOD BLESS
Tony
(((HUGS))) love and Merry Christmas!, Karla.