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Eye On Us
by Sharon Jordan → (All Poetry by Sharon Jordan)
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Eye on Us


 

 

This moment, this breath

I will focus

Upon

Those around me

To protect

I must

Learn to trust

To love

Us


 


 

Copyright 2007 by Sharon Jordan


 


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 Reviews of "Eye On Us"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 20, 2007
These are powerful and meaningful sentiments, Sharon. Respectfully, I ponder them. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on February 24, 2007
yes good write
trust can be hard sometime but when its given, its bliss
pax A

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on February 23, 2007
A nice poetic thought...and a nice view of the trust we must create and accept in order to live within love....

nice work....Art Sun...

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on February 23, 2007
trust is the essential element in loving others ... somehing we should protect with all our hearts ...

a beautiful aand insightful poem, Sharon ...

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on February 22, 2007
wow
short and sweet
wonderful share!!!

Reviewed on February 22, 2007
short n sweet

Reviewed by Richard Orey
Reviewed on February 21, 2007
My dear Sharon,
Living in Southern California as we do with thousands coming and going daily, unearned, untested trust is oftentimes foolhardy and naive. For many people, taking advantage of someone's trust is a way of life. It's the way they make a living.

Trust in God and trust your own judgment.
One reliable test is to discover the reality of in whom or what does the other person place their trust? If they don't place their trust in God, then their values are different from mine. Sometimes a first clue is observing that they don't trust anybody but themselves.
Forgive me for preaching, but Satan's emissaries are everywhere.

When God comes first, everything else falls in proper order.

Go with God,
Richard

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on February 21, 2007
Love without trust, is on dead end street..

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on February 21, 2007
many truths in this poem.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 21, 2007
This is a deep offering!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)
Reviewed on February 21, 2007
To give of yourself so completely and trust one another,
Michael

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on February 21, 2007
Beautiful truths and has spirtual basis of truth also Sharon.

Peace,
Joselyn

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on February 21, 2007
Sharon,

This doesn't waste any words and is so deep in meaning.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on February 21, 2007
Profound statement that is a big commitment in love and in the ones we pull close to our hearts in a protective shield. Blind trust is the hardest of all, for although I believe trust must be earned, if it is given blindly, when or if that trust is broken so is the innocence of the heart broken forever.

Fee

Reviewed on February 20, 2007
Becoming aware of and loving ourselves (not in the vanity sense) is a prerequisite to loving others. Trust has to be earned as well as learned. For me, cynicism grew the more I was betrayed throughout the years. Mercifully, this negative feeling has largely diminished. I let my intuition play the trust card. Loving someone in Christ's name is almost a mantra in church circles. One wonders if this act is a copout to love in one's own name. The mind boggles.
You manage to address first person singular, third person plural, and also first person plural. As such the personal injunction has a universal appeal.

Regards
Dai

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on February 20, 2007
That is a beautiful pledge.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on February 20, 2007
It's a good thing for all of us to meditate on that subject.


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