Loved One's Stranger (poem) by John T Banasiewicz Jr on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 29, 2004

I have now read most of your poetry, and find it all inspired, this one in particular... or is it simply that this one so poignantly strums a familiar chord? Thanks for doing your work.

Reviewed by Denise Edwards

Reviewed on May 15, 2004

This is a very fine tell of the pain and helplessness families must go through when a loved one has Alzheimer's. You tell a sensitive and understanding story that's very endearing. thanks for sharing, John!

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on May 14, 2004

You've described this situation so well, and the sadness and helplessness it casts on those afflicted with it,and those that love them.....very touching piece here....ty.......A

ps....I was not deliberately ignoring your other post....but I am not reading war poetry at the moment...its too upsetting for me personally.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 7, 2004

Very touching piece Tommy!!

Love Tinak

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on April 27, 2004

This is so deeply touching, well done.

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on April 27, 2004

This was an excellent portrayal of that condition, one many can relate to, this one touched my heart so deeply, excellent,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Rose L

Reviewed on April 25, 2004

Tommy,

This is a personal and touching write. So many lives have been affected by Alzheimer's - both those who suffer with it and their families & friends who endure with them. You have captured the heart-breaking essence of this disease - robbing the person of their memories.

Thank you so much for sharing this personal and compelling poem.

~Rose~

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on April 25, 2004

Very touching and true account of life's cruelty to some. More so the family than the one afflicted with it. Sad. Very nice penned, sir.

Reviewed by Rene' Bennett (Reader)

Reviewed on April 25, 2004

Alzheimer's is a very sad desease, expecially for the loved ones who witness this. Nice write.

Rene'

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on April 24, 2004

My mother had this disease before we lost
her last year...it is the saddest thing to
see...It just tears at your heart when a
loved one doesnt recognize you...the eyes
blank...it tore me apart...this was wonderful
writing JOhn....thanks for this...floria

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on April 24, 2004

A thoughtful and compassionate piece, Tommy. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 24, 2004

(((john)))

this is a thought provoking, moving, tender dedication to those that suffer this horrendous disease--thank you for your big, beautiful heart and for this write--it should be required reading for all.

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :( *tears*

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on April 24, 2004

So gently and knowingly penned, Tommy.. a poem for the ages. This devestating illness 'plagues' so many of our wise and wonderful citizens. You have a dear heart, to think of those who may forget, but are never forgotten. I especially loved the part about his being a woodsman, never lost.. great imagery and contrast for the rest of the write. Wonderful piece! katy xox.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on April 24, 2004

This is a dreadful disease that steals one's livlihood. To watch as they deteriorate is painful and unrelentless. We know they are there...somewhere.
I've known people that say that at the very end they do return, and they were always grateful they didn't know where they'd been.
Touching write John. Lisa

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on April 24, 2004

John, this touched me deeply. As a nursing assistant for many years I worked with many Alzheimers patients. It is so sad how it robs the patient of so much. A once vital and outgoing person can be brought down to a sad, lonely human being with no memory of loved one's are past joy's. I have seen it so many times, John. Your compassionate heart show's in this beautiful write.

*Linda*