I lightly dozed,
an open book on my chest,
the kitty lay purring beside me,
when laughter rang out,
I woke up with a jolt,
I knew that I wasn’t alone.
I reeled from shock
after opening the door.
My visitors were loved ones
who’d gone on before.
Tears coursed down my cheeks
as I hugged each one close.
“Is this real?
Are you here?”
Joy deluged shadows
where misery had dwelt,
replacing the darkness with light.
The heady scents I’d missed
drenched my memory like rain…
Clove oil, tobacco,
gardenias, and bread,
powder, and lemon verbena.
Smiles, and giggles,
a communion of words,
filled voids in my life
that had formed when they left.
Then as swift as they’d come,
they stepped back through the veil,
withdrew from the voids,
dimming my heart’s light once more.
It was night when I woke.
They were only a dream.
Though crushed, bereft
as reality set in,
what they’d offered was proof
that they weren’t far away…
that we’d all be together again.
In their way they’d assured,
all is good, all is right.
Nearby, they’re waiting for me.
Michelle Close Mills ©
Thank You It's Beautifully written.
Merriest of Christmas' and many Blessed years
Tracey
love:
"The vivid scents I had missed,
drenched my memory like rain…
clove oil, tobacco,
gardenias,
and bread,
dusting powder,
and lemon verbena."
Very creative of you to use our oldest and most
memory-triggering sense. And the smells you
chose are wonderfully unpredictable. Not only
evocative, but lead to a rich variety of sounds
that roll deliciously on the tongue.
Brava!! Phyllis :) PS: Thanks, too, for leading
me to Autumn Leaves. <3
Take care,
Sherry
an exceptional write--you've evoked many complex feelings in this powerful piece--i agree with judy, they come back when youneed them the most. well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(
I've been struggling to place a review to this poem. Not because I didn't think it was good - quite the contrary. I think your work is extraordinary. I am finding it difficult to respond because the experience has stirred something in me. I find death to be so incredibly sad - not for the one that goes but for those of us left behind. I don't know what this dream meant but I can only imagine how it made you feel. I felt it with you so profoundly impactful were these words.
Thank you for sharing precious friend
Love Chanti
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D