The Promised Land (poem) by Peter Paton on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 6, 2006

I gave you my Promise
You gave me your Heart

And that is truly a very blessed thing.

Reviewed on January 6, 2006

Right on the button and on the money with Sage... a most sacred holism of life, light and love here, Peter - what the perfection of each of these three elements should be. And each individual aspect of the three is a pillar building to that connubial heavenly bliss you speak of. Wonderment, reverence and fulfillment in your lines. TY Kate xx

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on January 5, 2006

From My Published Books: MEANING OF TRUTH-

WHICH PROMISES REWARD TO HIM THAT ENDURTH TO THE END...

Temptation: Only You Alone Can Avoid Devil Or Revel With Him in His Eternal Hell,i.e. Even Satan Has Own Promised Land...

There's Rock N Roll Group Used My Lyrics: c 1979/2005 TRASK

LYRICS:

You Will Go To Hell
Before You Ever Get To Heaven...

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What You Wrote Is Well Written Meaningful Write To Make Any 1 Stop And Open 1's Eyes To Think True Meaning Of What Is: The Promised Land...

TRASK

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on January 5, 2006

A classic. Great depth, and most inspiring..

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on January 5, 2006

This is a beautiful creation Peter, equally matched by superb Pre-Raphellite art. A Spritually uplifting and inspiring piece indeed.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on January 5, 2006

A marriage consecrated in The Promised Land, Eros, Agape, Gnosticism, and the two forms of love, egocentric and theocentric live together, not separate. On one side is the man/woman with a passion, on the other side, Goddess/God who respects man's/woman's integrity while lifting them up into a new relation of love. Properly understood, effort of man/woman to liberate themselves and reach union with Goddess/God and Goddess/God-centered love as divine grace helping man and woman in love. This is the Absolute Value of Goddess/God love, Peter. Pure, true, and beautiful.

Sage

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on January 5, 2006

"The Promised Land" is a divine poem celebrating both spiritual and physical love! It's a wonderfully expressed poem of love in its purest form! Bravo, Peter! Bravo!

Gwen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 5, 2006

Beautiful uplifting and inspiring write Peter!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 5, 2006

What a joyous marriage in the promised land.It is an inspired poem of precious beauty and grace! Oh if only it could be this way Peter!
Splendid uplifting write. Thank you!

Eileen

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on January 5, 2006

Peter,
Such beautiful spirituality in this communion, this is a precious and beautiful poem, witness of purity and love. Thank you for sharing this poem it is so honorable.

Joselyn