Set Point (poem) by Peter Paton on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Christine Christine (Reader)

Reviewed on July 22, 2006

Very powerful write!
Gwen

Reviewed on July 20, 2006

And Taylor "saves the best for last"...finally getting a chance to post!
Peter, never lose the "wondrous child" in your heart or the invincibility in spirit that goes along with it that makes you uniquely you . You've approached life head on and volleyed every shred it has to offer. Smashing write! Life is more than game, set, match, but I'll take you on!

Love,
Taylor

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay

Reviewed on July 20, 2006

Great writer, Peter.

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on July 20, 2006

Brilliant Peter..that's tellin' 'em..bravo!

vesna :)

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on July 19, 2006

Wow
I think you just told somebody off!!!

love this line Peter

for life is too short and precious, to let the pygmies push you around

I assume you mean mental pigmies.....lol.....not the little fellas....
because that would be politically incorrect...which in the US is a big deal....don't know how it is in the UK.....but I got a kick out of the line......lol......

good game

pax A

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on July 19, 2006

Wow Peter, that was a powerful write! Loved the last two lines, a (self) empowering poem, brain over muscle is always the best.
B&R

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on July 19, 2006

"I am a self made man" indeed Sir Peter.

And one that defies categorization or equal.

Yours in the harmonious synchronization of all that is laced with the platinum threads of creativity and goodness.

Richard the Intrepid

Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)

Reviewed on July 19, 2006

This will be an 'ace' then...no line calls at all! LOL...really positive, honest and strong write my friend.
Love Panda :)

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 19, 2006

Great stuff, Peter; enjoyed much! Very well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by Elizabeth Parsons

Reviewed on July 19, 2006

Way to go, Peter! Powerful Words.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 19, 2006

You sure sound like a Dragon Slayer to Me!

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 19, 2006

Sounds like a great way to walk through life, I believe in standing tall and trying all. lol

Fee

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on July 18, 2006

Amazing wrie here, keep it up and be blessed in the writing
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 18, 2006

Juice........lol!!

Or is it Deuce.....whatever.....Wallowing the baall too much... so I am no good player of this game...."Squash" a better game...sitting against the wall squashing balls!!

Hehehehehehe......have a kooooooler day today okay!!

Love TinkZZZZZZ

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 18, 2006

powerful juxtapositing of imagery and motif ...

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on July 18, 2006

A powerful write, Peter!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on July 18, 2006

Yes! You are you...our peer and a fine mentor to some of us. I admire Peter...the undividual first and foremost and I respect all of you.
Susan

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on July 18, 2006

well done!!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 18, 2006

That'a the spirit Sir Peter of Scotland Dragon Slayer ! I'd love to play a set or two with you, bet there would be lots of love points in a very satisfying match;-)jk,,,lol Great poem!