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Jubilation
by Peter Paton → (All Poetry by Peter Paton)
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Desire is the starting point of all achievement, not a hope, not a wish, but a keen pulsating desire which transcends everything.

 

Napoleon Hill

..........................................................................

 

A dream developed within my mind

like a pearl inside its incumbent shell

if I could but, push the boat out a little further

I might indeed, reach the other side of the shore

where the old comes to an end, and the new begins

and I am freed, from the chains that bind and hold

enabled to soar, like a condor on the thermals

and go, where no man has gone before

no longer to feel, the earthly pull or strain

because my mind, is crystal clear and unfettered

would you come along too, to see the view

that I have discovered, to be oh so true

where the lamb lies down, in peaceful abode

and the lion of Judah, welcomes everyone

to feast one and all, at his table of joy

I tell you categorically, this is no dream

 

Copyright by Peter Paton 2006

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 Reviews of "Jubilation"
Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on April 25, 2009
AMEN!


Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 4, 2006
i have no doubt you will reach the other side of the shore, Peter ...

Reviewed on November 2, 2006
Wonderful Peter!!! Very inspiring!!!!!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on November 1, 2006
You help keep the dream alive, Dear Peter!

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*

Reviewed on November 1, 2006
I hope to make this journey someday, but I'm not in any hurry to buy a ticket.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 31, 2006
Peter you are a treasure! This is a resplendent tribute to our Lord and Savior and all that He truly is and means to those who believe. Your faith is a beacon for all to follow!Bravo! ET

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Reviewed on October 31, 2006
Allelujah! The LORD God omnipotent reigneth. Let us be glad and rejoice, and give honor to Him; for the marriage of the lamb is come...

Peter, you are a Keeper of the Gate!

GET READY>>>>>>
Love&JOY! Rhonda

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on October 31, 2006
That's when they'll be total peace.
Can't wait..

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 31, 2006
Most excellent!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 31, 2006
And I believe you, Peter.

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on October 30, 2006
wow...and again, I say wow...this is sublime!

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on October 30, 2006
Sir Peter of the Cornucopia of Truth ...

And dear friend ... I concur with you categorically that when the trump sounds that the dead in Christ shall rise and those that remain alive will be gathered together to be with their Lord forever.

Why do I feel that day is closer than ever before. You speak eloquently of the translation of the Bride of Christ, and of the thousand year period of peace on earth that will follow the second coming of Jesus Christ.

If goosepimples could be bartered as currency, I could retire today.

In fraternity ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on October 30, 2006
Indeed, this is crystal and SHINES, Peter! :)) 24 carat and the lucidity is totally brilliant and so emphatic. Pure drops of revelation here expressed in lines that stimulate and evoke the big AMEN!! A view worth aspiring to! TY and bless you, Kate xx

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on October 30, 2006
Peter,

What a day of Jubulation when the LAMB OF JUDAh and the lamb lay together and the peace of all mankind is finally birthed to each one at the Jubulation.......... This is wonderful from beginning to end....

Love Light PEace,
Joselyn

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
Reviewed on October 30, 2006
Inspirational write, Peter.

Chrissy

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 30, 2006
Very effective and inpiring write,that bursts with the passion of your belives.

Fee

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on October 30, 2006
That was sublime. I loved it. So much to the point using enough words to convey your message. Victor

Reviewed on October 30, 2006

"Jubilation"
A beautiful poetic rendering!

Thank you Peter,
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm



Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on October 30, 2006
Tou pen his offering of travel so expertly and with a while lotta faith. I want to go. Book my passage, well...I feel it's already booked!
Love and peace!
Susan

Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)
Reviewed on October 30, 2006
What vision you have dear Peter...and how eloquently you share the beauty that you see. As ever your writing stirs the soul and brings such tranquility to the spirit and mind...wonderfully calming post Rheinfest! lol. Love and hugs Panda :)

Reviewed on October 30, 2006
Truly a beautiful, uplifting write; very well done, Peter! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed on October 30, 2006
The lamb will lie with the lamb and a child will be able to play safely beside the viper. I catgorically believe in this world that you believe in, Peter. Like the apostle Paul who desired to be with Christ which was far better, we have to stay on this side of the golden shore until the good Lord calls us home.
I am always stirred to read poems that are penned by faith.
Amen.
Regards
Dai

PS
I always regarded Saltcoats as a 'snobby' place when I was a kid. This regard was governed by my attitude to the only briefcase carrying pupil at our school who bragged about going to Saltcoats. 'Smug get,' I thought.


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