Eyes of icy blue settle on me I feel that electric stare the heat encompassed in your gaze as I turn and see you standing across the room watching You've spoken to me before of fantasies of late-night dreams of hours passed remembering the shape of my lips the slant of my eyes the curls that sway to my waist I want your touch to play out your fantasies to re-live your dreams to feel your lips claiming mine to feel your weight pressing me into the mattress But it can never be you are bound to a life you vowed to cherish and I will not be the blade that severs those ties This attraction will forever be what it has always been Forbidden desires only remembered in the quiet of the nights we both spend alone
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Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)
Reviewed on August 21, 2005
Oh sh....
Can relate to this one very well.
Are you okay?
Amira
Reviewed by Dan Zuewski (Reader)
Reviewed on August 10, 2005
that one hit home a bit... I've been there... on both sides of that poem...
great writing brings that emotional and visual punch ;)
Sometimes the forbidden yet unrealized is much better than the realized. I found that out all too late with my ex-husband. You've expressed this amazingly Danielle. Michelle
Very nice D- all too familiar too- Nothing wrong with a little favorite FAntasy. YOUr right to approach what is forbidden would bring on more pain... if known. Thank you 4 this. Wonderfully written too.. Loved reading it. HuGs,Sheee
This piece is very moving, well written and I can't speak for others but I think anyone who has ever had either a real or even imagined love affair with someone unavailable can emphazize with it so easily. Your words make me want to reach out, hug you hold your hand and say there will be another who will be loveable to only you someday.
Felix
Loneliness, sadness, such is life, and I can truly relate to the line "Forbidden desires only remembered in the Quiet of the nights we both spend alone" I've fallen in love too many times with someone who couldn't be with me. beautiful poem. Pierre
Don't let those nights go by too long, give yourself to that person, and that person to you...if you are both alone, you both deserve the other, don't wait too long for feelings change and you cannot turn back the clock, unfortunately...Ed
Can relate to this one very well.
Are you okay?
Amira
great writing brings that emotional and visual punch ;)
Felix
Paul;-]
Peace, Carole
love Tinka
eileen
Monette