Leave me alone (poem) by Danielle Mundy on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 16, 2006

Excellent work. Well said.

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)

Reviewed on January 18, 2006

That's the problem I guess. In the beginning we often see a person that does not exist. Once we realize, we start moving towards the end...and love dies.
Touching write.
Love
Amira

Reviewed by Tyrone Banks (Reader)

Reviewed on December 22, 2005

Just dropped by to return your visit. I agree, the "Art of Venting" is truly a delicate one and I too turn to poetry/prose to get thoughts out of my head...

God Bless,

Tyrone

Reviewed by EKEOMA ABRAHAMS

Reviewed on December 22, 2005

the power and poise of the writer potrays that there is something beyond life.It gives hope to unsong hereos and for me ideas rule the world not structure; ideas that are profusely poured live after forever. abraham- san pablo university ceu, spain.

Reviewed by Gary Gebert

Reviewed on November 24, 2005

Hope you find peace someday.

Gary

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on November 22, 2005

I agree with Paul here this is a great poem that sends a strong message of hope and encouragement to other victims. Life is an open book as Paul states but so is new love, when we read those first few pages it is meant to hook us into reading more and it is sometimes not till we have read most of the book we realize it was the shits and a waste of our time, so go find a new book. I think Love is like that in a lot of ways.

Felix

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on November 22, 2005

Danielle,

Sometimes people only allow us to see what they want us to. Life is an open book and we can never tell what's behind the cover until we flip through the pages. Your venting is well justified.

Reviewed by Dan Rains (Reader)

Reviewed on November 22, 2005

Get it out of your system....just don't forget. Nice work.
Dan

Reviewed by Jeff Mason

Reviewed on November 21, 2005

Vent away - we all need to vent from time to time. It's sad the world has so many people like that - replacing love with anger, and taking it out on the ones closest to them. -- Jeff

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on November 21, 2005

People change -
Some for the better; and some for the worse.
In your mind you are probably realizing that
you have made the right choice.

Well-done!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine

Reviewed on November 21, 2005

Perhaps that man was never there. Excellent write. R