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Beautiful love song
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The ache of separation is intensely painful!
No easy way out
No escaping


We must face it when our heart is breaking
Even if that someone isn't right for us
Having tried to maintain love
We suffer incredibly
When we have to give each other up


Borrowed time, sharing moments that add
To increase attachment
Even with someone it seems we were never meant to meet


But love was shared and rarely spared
Pretending we were right
Care, concern, deep effort, and trust
These were a few things that sometimes seemed so good for us


Affection so tender, who would want to be with another
Relationships build in the softness of each other


When effort is made it seems we really can love
Despite latent tears and fears, and moving beyond
When two people are in harmony
It's a beautiful love song

 
 

 


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 Reviews of "Beautiful love song"
Reviewed on February 20, 2007
A moving love song down intto the inner feelings of the soul. best wishes my friend Suzie Palmer

Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)
Reviewed on December 20, 2006
A beautiful love poem full of truth -the last two lines say it all.
~Butch

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on January 12, 2006
Beautiful insping words of truth and love.

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on January 5, 2006
Love is worth everything. Even the pain it leaves in parting. Beauty, Suzie...Lin

Reviewed by Pierre Ortega
Reviewed on December 28, 2005
Love happens to us and then we happen to it and our love changes forever, for better or for worse, but we allways have the right to decide. Peace. Pierre.


Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 25, 2005
Yes. This is a beautiful love song that says it, Suzie: "Love is all!" Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you.

Regis

Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi
Reviewed on November 15, 2005
It is very, very beautiful indeed. Your very deep poem speaks of things that happen to be much of my concern and never more so than now.

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on November 8, 2005
Excellent heartfelt write

William .....love& peace

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on November 7, 2005
Yes when its right it is wonderful but the other side of it is so very painful. Great write and worth the chance isn't it?

Reviewed on November 3, 2005
heartfelt poetry, suzie; very well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

check out my new story; think you will like it!~ :)

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 3, 2005
Suzie you have touched on a sacred heart string with this one and describe the sweet agony of parting so well, whether the parting be because of lost interest, another lover, death or just facing up to the rule of the law the heartached is still no less. The key I think is remembering that love even if it is fleeting is always worth the chance of losing it.

Felix

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on November 3, 2005
Care, concern, deep effort and trust.... are the building blocks for a true love. Splendid write.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on November 3, 2005
Suzie,
Love is only worth the time and effort we afford it. It had to have a beginning and is definitely worth preserving. Beautiful write.

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on November 2, 2005
The closer we come to such a state of love, the quieter we become, the lighter and more potent we feel. We will know because we will sense it. Our inner indicator is at work. Love requires giving one's respect and care, allowing the quiet to feel out both one's own part and the other's. Respect for love fosters more love. The first set of love's hands feels cold and agressive; the second set warm and soothing. This is when two people are in harmony. Cue the violins, Suzie, you deserve to be serenaded with a beautiful love song!

Sage

Reviewed by Alain Gracio
Reviewed on November 2, 2005
A beautiful message and poem. It has integrity
Cheers
Alain

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 2, 2005
You got that right Suzie! A beautiful poem, sharing how it pays to work at love, it just doesn't prosper by itself! Well done!

Love,
Eileen


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