The first line (poem) by Suzie Palmer on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 21, 2006

clever!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on June 21, 2006

Sweet and simple and yet so meaningful, Suzie; thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on June 20, 2006

Very good!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay

Reviewed on June 20, 2006

An inspirational poem for 'stuck' poets...

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on June 19, 2006

If Only All Humanity Lived Life With More Care!

TRASK

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia

Reviewed on June 19, 2006

This is darling, Suzie-girl, just like you! Tiny poem - Humongous import! Way to hum.........love& prayers ~ rhonda

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on June 19, 2006

I agree Suzie, that first line in anything is so important.

When we purpose to push forward in faith, no matter what it is, ofttimes miracles do follow right behind us.

Richard

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on June 19, 2006

Yes, that first line sets the tone for the whole write. Metaphor for life, Suzie. When we are writing, we're totally absorbed in the moment. Would be wonderful if we were as totally concious in all areas of life. Sweet poem, dear sis!

Lin

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on June 19, 2006

Spark to a flame, as they say in the bush. -if they don't they should-lol

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on June 19, 2006

It is often a thought, a word, or something that you have begun to write a line, that sparks a whole poem or a whole story.

Wonderful inspirations, Suzie! I love this simple poem!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on June 19, 2006

Your poen starts as a spark and energizes the lines to read perfection.
Love it.
Susan

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on June 19, 2006

This is such a reality when writing poetry it is not the poem that matters so much as the thought or idea expressed.

Fee

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on June 19, 2006

That's all it takes Suzie and you did it so well.

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on June 19, 2006

Suzie
A power packed little gem, with a great meaning to it !
We need a more caring all inclusive society..
God Bless
Peter

Reviewed by Pierre Ortega

Reviewed on June 18, 2006

" To live life with far more care" If only everyone could read this, and listen. Pierre.