Dear Folks, this should be the final poem of this nature...
Thank you for bearing with me and my unceasing heart. Love, Suzie :-D
Confusing, confusing The musings of mind Particularly when it comes from a kind That rests their thoughts on nothing sublime
Why is so much effort generated there? From others who truly wish to care Why even try to breakthrough glue When no appreciation comes flooding through
It seems the one who has come undone Prefers to remain in life without fun Maybe the best that we can do Is to let go and allow all life to live freely under the sun
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Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)
Reviewed on January 6, 2007
Confusion is an ever present part of life. What is important is how we deal with it. Your last line provides the answer. Well done!
~Butch
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~Butch
Don't let it ALL go!
Go with the Flowww in your mind....
Sweet Write~
WArm HuGs,Sheee
Allen
Regis
love tinka
Fee
compelling and well written, SuZie ...