Love that breaks For the sake of Heartache Lives this life Enduring strife Of a lover’s blithe Yet can cut like a knife More than slight The bleeding’s bright Lacking foresight To make things right Beyond another night ... But, this heart sits tight Rests in light Awaiting the one in whom to delight!
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Reviewed by Simon Barreiros (Reader)
Reviewed on January 22, 2007
Lovely poem, and a wonderful resolve into hope and faith. Enjoyed it immensely.
yours,
simonb
Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez (Reader)
Reviewed on January 17, 2007
Very refreshingly true!
well done!
blessings to you and yours',
Hurting is part of the process of finding true love,
Someone to share dreams with and grow together,
Hope will carry you through and you will find
what you seek,Your heart will know,Excellent write
my friend,
God Bless,
Michael
Reviewed by Poet Pablito (Reader)
Reviewed on January 16, 2007
Delightful and clever.. I enjoyed. P
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 16, 2007
The hurting is a pain in the butt, I know this pain/angst so well that he's now a internal buddy.lol
Your find him, no doubt about that. If not I'm behind the ole bikeshed...
Oh Suzie this is direct and yet I can feel an undercurrent of pain mixed with new hope that love may still come to heal the break that someone else has wrought. Great images that snap on the syntax of the brain as the poem races ahead.
Fee
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yours,
simonb
well done!
blessings to you and yours',
Rich Criso
Regis
Hope love will find a way by not hurting so much at times!!
Love Tinka
Someone to share dreams with and grow together,
Hope will carry you through and you will find
what you seek,Your heart will know,Excellent write
my friend,
God Bless,
Michael
Your find him, no doubt about that. If not I'm behind the ole bikeshed...
One has only so much blood to give. Like a light sometimes love bleeds out. Your rhyming is very good.
Fee