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Ideal Relationship
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Written: 19 August 07

What’s a relationship without trust?
Does it exist?
If so, strange and tough

What’s a relationship without respect?
Is it possible?
To love the dishonourable

What’s a relationship without care?
Does it having meaning
Anywhere

What’s a relationship that’s not true ?
It’s false and dissimilar
To anything you do

What’s a relationship good between two?
It listens and supports deep loving
Through and through

A good relationship
Is mighty to pursue
Because without it the world can’t go on anew

 
 

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Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)
Reviewed on April 5, 2008
I absolutely love the ending.
Wise and powerful write.
Amira

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 27, 2008
There is much truth and wisdom in what you express here, Suzie. Thank you for sharing these worthy sentiments. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 24, 2008
A relationship without trust,respect...and care are a dead relationship....but being married before God..a tough cookie to handle!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
Reviewed on March 24, 2008
Suzie,
These are terrific thoughts to ponder. Relationships take a lot of work, to maintain their healthiness, and there is a lot of give and take involved. If either side is doing ALL the giving or ALL the taking, the relationship is destined to fail. It is easy, in love, to be blind to the things that should be painfully obvious, but if we are wise, we'll still see the things that are important.

Well written; thanks.

Jill

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 24, 2008
Questions that we all must ask and sometimes answer. The balance of what we can accept in a relationship and what would be the perfect relationship has so many variables that it is hard to follow a steadfast rule. People can turn blind eyes to some things but not to others and only the individual can decide. Well done Suzie as always you cut to the chase and pour your heart into your work.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Cedric III
Reviewed on March 24, 2008
relationships are complex creations thats for sure.
there are so many elements involved and if one of them is out of whack the whole relationship hangs in the balance sometimes.
you ask a whole lot of questions in this piece that most have had to ask at one point or another.
a piece many will be able to relate to on some level.


Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on March 23, 2008
Speaking of questions... :-)
You are looking at all the essential points here,
the things that really matter,
as we grow, as we improve, I believe
that this is what we are all looking for.

Axilea

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on March 23, 2008
...wisely penned questions...find their own answer within your poetry...and italic words give support to every question asked.
well done Suzie...
John


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