Great to be reading some of your poetry, so glad I stopped by.
Intriguing write as is the title, but then I suppose it makes sense considering your last line in your poem,
"‘cause you are all you add
to this collection"
You seem to have come full circle in this poem, from a state of confusion... right back to the start. Looking in from the outside and seeing yourself looking straight back at you. A very complex write but very well done, thanks for sharing Edwin.
Dear Ed,
Wise words and a cause to ponder. I especially think the last line was hard hitting and to the point: ‘cause you are all you add
to this collection' It makes me think about what I write and how. There are many ways in which one could interpret your words and I'm sure that people will read their own subjective meanings into this as I did. As for the CFMEMAMX in the title, I told you what I think it stands for during our last phone call. ;-)I wonder if others will guess.
Love Chanti
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Great to be reading some of your poetry, so glad I stopped by.
Intriguing write as is the title, but then I suppose it makes sense considering your last line in your poem,
"‘cause you are all you add
to this collection"
You seem to have come full circle in this poem, from a state of confusion... right back to the start. Looking in from the outside and seeing yourself looking straight back at you. A very complex write but very well done, thanks for sharing Edwin.
warm hugs
Elga
"Days Of Our Lives"
in
"Another World".
Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)
Whoa. That made me take a long look at my eighty - something contributions and do a quick sum-up. Ouch. Is that what I am? Hmmm...
Great write!
Peace,
B
Wise words and a cause to ponder. I especially think the last line was hard hitting and to the point: ‘cause you are all you add
to this collection' It makes me think about what I write and how. There are many ways in which one could interpret your words and I'm sure that people will read their own subjective meanings into this as I did. As for the CFMEMAMX in the title, I told you what I think it stands for during our last phone call. ;-)I wonder if others will guess.
Love Chanti