Sarah never realized
the souls she tried to save
were pieces of her own
that were stole away
Seeking refuge from her slumber
she danced naked through her dreams
and woke up to a nightmare
in a place she’d never been
On the edge of disillusion,
inside the darkest realm,
she reached for fate
to free the weight
that held her in its spell
Those who looked upon her
were blinded by it all
Caught up in their own image
never thinking they would fall
For the songs that they were hearing
were all inside their minds
Self-righteous in a sickness
that had turned them blind
Through arid shifting hues
of an early golden sky,
upon the ground
their shadow’s sound
was much louder than her cry
The world that she did live in
of loving smiles and light,
reflected clouded colours
and her day
soon turned to night
For those who looked upon her
were like maggots who did feed
with psychotic desperation
and masks of twisted need
Proclaiming faith, they raised their shields
toward the sun that left them cold
Sheltered by the ignorance
of much less nurtured souls
Those who stood beside her
were muted and not heard
stripped of respect
with no regret
for open honest words
Sarah was once trusting
Love was all she gave
Now the maggots
whither in her truth
and she’ll dance
upon their graves
Edwin Dante Larson (c)2007
YOu spoke /wrote so clearly, love your choice of wording Edwin!
SAD, and I still want to feel that longing, that I feel in your lines!
GREAT POEM! Thank you for sharing!
Warm hugs and love, Warrior Lady Sheeeoox
Stay Positive, Happy and STrong!
Such a sad tale indeed.
Be safe,
Karen
Masterfully composed, so much truth in those words. Maggots can only thrive in darkness, cast out the night and allow the sunshine to stream eternally bright!
Hugs and love
Elga
Rose
FEe
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Awesome poetry! This is the first time I've read you, but won't be the last. You have amazing talent, Edwin! I'll be tracking you.
Many blessings,
~Linda
I relate to Sarah in so many ways. ;) I know this was inspired by what we've been exposed to recently. However, it's not for me to discuss the meaning but rather to comment upon the creative attributes of the poem.
Excellent metaphors and superb imagery my darling. I am always in awe of your creative genius.
Your Snuggles xxx
PS: I'd rather 'dance' on the beach with you at sunset with the carefree ebullience of a child ;)
A somber, yet and non-equivocal poem.
Georg