She would wile away her warm spring days with gardens, flowers and fields, dreaming of green gables and blades of knighted steel
He splashed through golden sunlight woods and water held his key to a land they both would visit where they'd share their fantasy
They dreamed of far off places of the lives that they would lead that in the distant future they would someday meet
They both knew inside their hearts though a million miles away that they would find each other and live in love one day
But time is like a whip with every lash the pain grows shorter The stones that hold your castle strong crumble with the mortar It all comes back to who you are and you'll know you haven't gone that far if the image of your destiny is muted by a stagnant scheme and something holds you back when nothing else should matter
Life is a gift so precious Let your soul take flight Build your castle strong to endure the test of time When it comes back to why you're here its all so rich and oh so clear as the image of your destiny reawakens vivid dreams and nothing holds you back or is strong enough to matter
Their lives were never easy their lives were never plain and in the end they'll never wonder if the price was worth the gain
'Cause everything they dreamed of as children in the sun would come to be reality Pictures of their timeless love
Now in the summer of their lives their candles shine through wind and rain and light a path so rich and true their lives not lived in vain
'Cause it all comes back to why they're here its all so rich and oh so clear for the image of their destiny was sprung from vivid dreams... Green gables, woods and water
This is quite B - E - A - U - T - I - F - U - L!
I must say,
your words how you spattered our screens,
I felt I walked there in the scenes!
This is a pure gem I plan to treasure~~~
Thank you for sharing your heart and soul!
My new writing friend, I am FOLLOWING!
WArmly, WArrior Lady PURPLE Spirit Sheeeoox
BE SAFE!
Stay Positive!
BE Happy!
Oh Eddy, I've struggled so much to compose a response to this one because it was so meaningful for me. You've captured it perfectly. I love you!
Snuggles
Edwin, I don't know why, but I'm in tears! This is up there with your very best! So exquisitely written! Thank you for sharing. A keeper!;-)
Love,
Eileen
Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on May 24, 2007
Very well done. As one who writes of castles, dreams and dragons of life, I enjoyed this. Life is what it will be, dreams are what we do in the between. Lady J
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on May 24, 2007
Nicely done, but what does a yank know about castles, unless he's a yank in king arthurs court..
What a great write and it is funny how life is build almost like masonry one brick at a time, and sometimes they need to be replaced, removed repaired etc. Good metaphor.
Love and life, like grains of sand of a beach castle, with its unassailable towers and its dungeons.
A vivid expressed poems of a heart tribulations.
Georg
The songs and art in this book are about our collective emergence after the pandemic and trauma of the last few years - comprised of 5 collections: World as Refuge, Where We Live, In Our Hands, Rhythms of Change and What We See & Sow.
I must say,
your words how you spattered our screens,
I felt I walked there in the scenes!
This is a pure gem I plan to treasure~~~
Thank you for sharing your heart and soul!
My new writing friend, I am FOLLOWING!
WArmly, WArrior Lady PURPLE Spirit Sheeeoox
BE SAFE!
Stay Positive!
BE Happy!
Snuggles
Love,
Eileen
Awesome poetry and proof that love does prevail. Time only makes love grow stronger. Excellent!
Many blessings,
~Linda
Fee
A vivid expressed poems of a heart tribulations.
Georg