Just some lyrics (in the rough) I was working on from a song for my girl.
I can feel your heart beating you turn to me and smile Loving eyes I'm lost inside you take me far away Where summer winds blow warm against our skin Playing in the sand Laughing on the shore and baby so much more...
More that sends me reeling our bodies like the breeze Loving touch your taste so sweet It brings it all alive awakens ecstasy Fantasy we're living touching flesh to flesh Lasting till the end love opens up the door and baby so much more
Yeah, so much more that I am feeling Your head against my chest inhaling you I feel your breath Locked in time I taste your kiss as summer winds blow warm against our skin and we do it all again lasting till the end and so much more Yeah, Baby so much more
Can I use these lyrics for my date tomorrow night? I won't tell her right away I didn't write it, but I promise I will give you the credit later. Seriously, good lyrics. I like the use of "so much more" at the end of the verses. It makes one ponder.
Brett
Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on May 31, 2007
So great to watch your words come forth and it's wonderful of the one it is for can paint a little more color into the write. Thank you for trusting us with this special part of your lives. Lady J
I remember a perfect romantic sunset when we walked upon the sand until the sun went down, hand in hand. You told me to walk into the nice 'warm' water and I complied trustingly and then squeeled. It was freezing cold!!! Even though my toes were numb, we frolicked in the surf, laughing like two kids. How wonderful it was to to back to our cosy hotel room, to feast on chocolate coated strawberries, sip on champagne and... Oh boy I've gotten carried away again. Wonderful memories and so many more to come. Thank you for this beautiful song. I have an advantage over those who read these lyrics. I got to hear you sing them.
I love you!
Snuggles xxxxxx
My head is resting on the sand, my eyes closed as I hear like a far away music and the laughter of a little girl.
And then I tought, life is so much more.
Georg
I can almost hear the soft licks of a steel guitar and the low beat of the bass as a waltz is danced to this one on a patio under the stars. Great stuff.
Fee
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on May 30, 2007
I love these lyrics they are tender and warm Edwin a beauty!!!!!!!
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Regis
done so well she's gonna melt
cool write
Brett
I love you!
Snuggles xxxxxx
And then I tought, life is so much more.
Georg
Laughing on the shore and baby so much more..." Beautiful
Fee
Peace Always, Josie