He claimed to be of Merlin's blood believing he could see things of which he had no clue His world a fantasy
Obsessed in his delusion a coward in the blind never knowing he was being watched so deep behind the lines He sought refuge in another role of his multi-personality but his words were his worst enemy and he soon exposed himself to be a tormented blackened soul
He forced a smile when the rain came retired early to his room where in silence he believed he held the key to fate and doom
On appearance he seemed shy He seemed humble and quite meek Not a warlock just a loser with no servants at his feet He struggled to control himself but his Jeckyll and his Hyde did battle deep inside and soon did come to meet
He locked onto his prey through words and sight and smell Armed with just a victim's hair he believed he'd cast his spell
But he was just a mortal with no power and no sight a sick and sad existence was his plight
Deeper he did sink into the bowels of his imaginings The curse of darkness overcame him and fell upon his very being
No dragon ever slain just his own infected brain No damsel in distress just frustration without rest Tormented and cast out he wandered through the city leaving waste to those entrusted A deceiver with no pity
The manhood that he cherished had been spared once before but mortality lurked just outside an ancient open door
The power that had healed him was now his enemy for he looked upon himself as being his own death's adversary
Some would claim there was no fault Some would find it cruel but they are only those he uses as his tools
Worthy are the souls who don't thrive in confusion who understand the gift of life is not born of their delusion
Be gone now Strip away the weakened shield of the deceiver Be gone now blackened soul Rejoin the dying embers Take this message to your grave so that all here may remember
Be gone now jaded defect Be gone pathetic thief Wander through forever to never fill you twisted needs Be gone now sick imposter cower in the shadows feel the blade until your end every time the wind blows
Be gone now lowly mortal feel the death rise from your groin suck deep your putrid dying breath and know you won't be coming back Suma Suro Anallah Trach (if you get some mental help you still could die at ninety of a painful heart attack :)
If any readers believe this crap take off your shoes and take a nap Awaken to reality Only through the maker comes the power and the rest is just a sick man's dream ;)
Quite interest and mysteriously intriguing.
Yes I would say there are some that truly believe such...I like all the detail and imagery that this poem possessed such as "Armed with just a victim's hair" you really did get deep and did not leave out anything in this write.
Wonderful,
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm
The power of personality traits and the ability to fool and enchant those naive is strong, and sadly it is the kind that usually end up suffering at the hands of these delusional maniacs. Your write captures the attention from the start and the really sad part these types would actually take this as a compliment to their black souls.
You paint well a troubled soul. Whether from real life or imagination, I feel as if I have met some characters just like this in my life Edwin. This one must have been fun to write. Loved it!
Check your second to last stanza - this line.
"suck deep your
your putrid dying breath"
Richard
Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on June 5, 2007
A very powerful write and I wish I saw more of them. "Only through the maker comes the power" This the only power I do need. I wish more people believed that evil can not hurt you only you can by believing these sick mortals. The name of the poem that came through was different then the one up top the page so I thought perhaps someone had exposed our ghostly perpetrator of evil messages. But alas he must be still elusive. This poem would discribe those who deceive so many. Great write. Lady J
Great character/spiritual sketch, Edwin, and commentary of the sicknes I see growing in our society. I don't know how many poor things I've met who want God's power when they are only God's creature. It only calls them to a downward spiral. This was a powerful piece...Jerry
Yes I would say there are some that truly believe such...I like all the detail and imagery that this poem possessed such as "Armed with just a victim's hair" you really did get deep and did not leave out anything in this write.
Wonderful,
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm
The only way to avoid darkness is to walk in the light...
love always... Snuggles
Great write.
Fee
Thank's for the correction...done.
Edwin
Check your second to last stanza - this line.
"suck deep your
your putrid dying breath"
Richard
Eileen